beckyboo Posted December 15, 2006 Report Posted December 15, 2006 Omg I hate Ash No Paris Ash and Sam woill not team up and ruin J&M hapiness Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
caitrules Posted December 15, 2006 Report Posted December 15, 2006 Yay Ash is comming back Sam on the other hand, doesn't that thick woman know when to take no for an answer? Great update
xsianx Posted December 15, 2006 Report Posted December 15, 2006 Ashhhhhh! Sam go away, leave my Ash alone, He's too good for you. Great writing miss Paris.
Nicom Posted December 15, 2006 Report Posted December 15, 2006 Ash is an Arse. Sam is a ... umm... Silly Sausage..
baby gurl Posted December 15, 2006 Report Posted December 15, 2006 Ahh!!!!!!! I hate Ash i hate ash i hate ash. How dare he beat Martha. I'll beat him up now What a b*****d. And Sam is back Your making me angry Paris and sad too Great chapter though PLease update soon i totally agree! when i get my hands on ash, i'll **********
-Laura- Posted December 15, 2006 Report Posted December 15, 2006 Grr Ash! Grr Sam! Both of them need to stay away! Ugh! Great writing though and cant wait for the next update!
-ParaisGal- Posted December 16, 2006 Report Posted December 16, 2006 Chapter Seven Martha felt a lump in her throat when she saw Sam enter, smiling at Jack as if she was one of his best friends. She glared at the 34 year old woman “What are you doing here?” She demanded. “I’m here to see Jack and I’d appreciate it if you’d leave.” She said sweetly. “She’s not going anywhere.” Jack said, putting a protective arm around Martha “Just leave, Sam, I don’t want you here. My life is with Martha and Isabel now, not you and Rory. Understand that and leave. Stay out of my life.” He said coldly. “Jack we can get through this, but not with her around so please, can we just talk?” She asked him, to her it was a reasonable request. To him it was like a request from hell. “No way, get lost Sam, we don’t want you here if you’d going to try and split us up.” He snapped nastily at her. “Fine, alright, but I’m not in town for long. You’ll lose your chance.” She said sweetly. “I don’t want that chance and I never will be desperate enough to take you back. Before, I was lonely Sam. There’s no other explanation of how I could’ve fallen for someone like you.” “But you did fall for me and you made a commitment and promise to me and Rory. So now you must stick to it.” She said calmly. “Rory is not my son. I care for him, of course I do, we were together for two months and he was like my son, but he wasn’t my son. He is Shane’s son, and you cannot take that away from Shane, Sam. He deserves to know his son!” Jack protested. “He deserves to rot in hell and that is exactly what I intend on happening. I sent him to jail so he could rot in hell and he is, which is what he richly deserves for insulting Kara’s memory.” She snapped at him “He insulted my daughter’s memory, stealing to get her help. That isn’t what I want Kara to be remembered for, ruining her parents’ marriage!” She said coldly. “As much I as I wish we could be friends we can’t. I’m very happily married, and Martha and I have a beautiful daughter. So leave Sam before I force you out that door.” He warned her. Sam gave Martha a filthy look “You’re wife wasn’t there when you needed her. She was off screwing another man, don’t you remember Jack? She screwed your best mate, Ashton Nader. Do you forget that? She’s a filthy slut, Jack and you need to realise that you’re better off without her.” She said calmly. Martha’s eyes filled with tears, she knew that was exactly what she had done and she couldn’t have regretted it more. She put Isabel into her arms and hurried out the door, buckling Isabel in and driving off quickly. She pulled over on the side of the road, bawling her eyes out. ------------------------------------------- “Dad nobody has any idea where she is! This is all Sam’s fault!” Jack fumed angrily. Martha hadn’t been seen for a while now. Tony hung up the phone “Ash is back in town, he came to see why his application to come back to Summer Bay was denied. Seeing as Martha’s missing, maybe she realised and left, although I’m sure she would’ve called you.” He told his son. Jack’s phone started ringing, and he picked it up when he saw Martha’s mobile number flashing on the screen “Martha you okay?” He asked her. “Jack Ash is following me!” She said, panicked. “Where are you?” “I’m on the Beach road.” She replied, hanging up the phone. Jack grabbed his keys “He’s tailing her, we gotta get her!” He said, hurrying out the door. ---------------------------------- “I haven’t done nothing mate!” Ash tried to tell Jack, who’d practically run him off the road. “Yes you did, you assaulted my wife!” He said angrily, shoving Ash against his own car. “No I didn’t!” He tried to plead his innocence. “Don’t play innocent Ash, it doesn’t suit you!” Jack snapped. “I didn’t do nothing bad Jack!” He changed his mind. “Admit it!” He roared at him. “I may have hit her a few times but that was it.” He tried to give himself a lighter sentence. Jack punched him hard and fast in the face. “Jack don’t!” Came his father’s voice as he pulled the cops toward them. “Jack that’s enough.” Peter warned him “Ashton Nader you’re coming down to the station of the assault of Martha Holden.” He said, grabbing him and thrusting him into the car. -------------------------------------------- “Jack, Martha’s in there with Isabel. I think she could use your support.” Peter told him. Jack hurried towards the door to Peter’s office, where his wife and daughter were “Martha!” He exclaimed, hurrying to her and wrapping his arms around her. “Jack.” She said softly, trying hard to remain composed “I thought he was going to get me Jack. I had no idea what he was going to do.” She sobbed into Jack. “It’s alright. We’ll get him and Sam out of our lives.” He promised. “I was thinking about what Sam said, Jack. She’s completely right, I am a dirty little slut.” She whispered to herself. “No you’re not, don’t think like that.” He shook her, trying to make her see sense. “But it’s true. When you needed your wife the most she was off with another guy.” She said miserably “A guy she’d only just met.” She said softly. “That doesn’t matter now Martha, it just doesn’t alright?” He tried hard to convince her. “You deserve better than me.” She said, looking him straight in the eye. “No I don’t, Martha. The sooner you realise that the better. I don’t want anybody but you.” He insisted “I love you and together we have a beautiful daughter, don’t ever forget that.” He insisted. She wiped her tears “Thanks.” She said softly. “I’m only telling the truth.” He whispered into her ear. Peter knocked then entered the room “Ash has been charged, and he’s left the bay, he’s been sent to another place of work and they are going to inform us when he doesn’t come in so we know if he’s coming back here, so you two should be safe.” He said, smiling at the happy young couple. NEXT CHAPTER: How far will Sam go to ruin their happiness? PLEASE RATE AND REVIEW! BTW, new fic about to go up.. By me. Obviously lol. Since HF is up, decided I needed a new one. I like having three.
gawguss_tiff Posted December 16, 2006 Report Posted December 16, 2006 Great chapter Paris argh stupid ash i was soo happy when jack punched him in the face lol (not that violence is a good thing) lol but he soo deserved it, and stupid sam she is the dirty s*** lol she better not do anything bad or i'll i'll kick her!! hard lol I really LOVE this fic it's taken over as my fav one now Update ASAP <3 Tiff
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