One More Chance

[Tasha]

Great chapt Paris. What happened to Baby Isa?? Is she staying with Jacky?? Im glad Martha is trusting Jacky

Please update soon

[-ParaisGal-]

The baby was with Martha lol.

[gawguss_tiff]

AWW that was soo cute i love jack lol he's soo sweet and poor martha she's soo scared its sad poor isabel she must know something is wrong with her mummy and i really like morag she soo nice to martha lol well great update paris update ASAP

[-ParaisGal-]

TIFF - MSN! lol. I order you!

[gawguss_tiff]

ok ok *holds hands up and backs away slowly* im coming jeez lol

[xsianx]

Aww.

Want to hear something funny? lol I bought my friend a fish for her birthday! took it into to school and then asked my teacher to let her take it home

[>>Emma<<]

Hehe ^ Sian that is funny

2 great chapters Paris! Glad to see Martha is re-building her trust in Jack! Please update soon

[-Laura-]

Aww that was so cute! They held hands! Glad to see she is starting to trust Jack again! Can't wait to see where this goes! Update soon! It's awesome!

[baby gurl]

aaaawwww thats so sweet!! please update soon....

[loobieloo]

That was a great chapter, really well written Paris and lots of descriptions, well done cant want for more