-lolly- Posted January 20, 2007 Report Posted January 20, 2007 I can't believe you killed Tony! Why? He's always so nice... Poor Jack and Lucas i just wanna give them both a big hug.
-ParaisGal- Posted January 20, 2007 Report Posted January 20, 2007 I kinda like Tony but kinda don't. And I've killed Beth in another fic, I'm not killing her twice, I'll have the Beth fans after my blood.
gawguss_tiff Posted January 20, 2007 Report Posted January 20, 2007 PARIS!!! aww that was soo sad you killed him aww now im sad paris .... haha your favourite trick lol excellent lol at least there wont be anymore really sad them getting over it scenes lol i liked beths speech thingy it was good UPDATE ASAP xoxox
~Rosey~ Posted January 20, 2007 Report Posted January 20, 2007 Well someone likes killing people in fics. Poor Tony Someone lieks pseedign up time in fics. I wonder who. Would write a lnoger review, but its 2:38 am Update later.
baby gurl Posted January 20, 2007 Report Posted January 20, 2007 :( aaaaawww poor jack and luc....why did u have 2 kill tony off? out of anyone in the bay tony!! update soon..xxx
beckyboo Posted January 20, 2007 Report Posted January 20, 2007 :o: Poor Tony Poor Jack and Luc Update soon Fab chapter
-ParaisGal- Posted January 21, 2007 Report Posted January 21, 2007 Chapter Fourteen: “Isabel don’t touch those!” Martha said two and a half years later. Isabel was reaching for her father’s car keys, something she’d done before which had resulted in Jack losing the keys to his blue Holden work car, something that Jack hadn’t been too pleased with. “I’m glad you rescued those.” Jack said, grinning at his daughter who was approaching the age of three “I can’t handle the embarrassment of nearly having to tell Pete I lost the keys.” “You were a nervous wreck last time. You were kinda cute when you were embarrassed.” She smirked at him. “Why thank you.” He said dryly, looking at her with a slight smile playing on his face. Martha’s smile suddenly drooped “Remember, we’re going to the cemetery today.” She said softly. “I know.” He answered quietly, heading out the door. --------------------------- Martha nodded to the Hunter’s, who had turned up. It was Tony’s birthday, or would be if he still walked this earth “Jack’s on his way. He’s bringing Luc and Belle.” She said, putting the flowers she held in her hand on the grave that was there. Beth had already polished the little plaque that told who had been buried there. She took Isabel in her arms, holding her tightly as they waited for Jack. Jack pulled into the cemetery with a sigh. He turned to Luc “Ready?” He asked. “As ready as I’ll ever be.” He said, unsmiling as he got out, taking Belle’s hand. Jack sighed, getting out and heading quickly over to Martha, who was kneeling beside the plaque and put a hand on her shoulder. Martha felt the hand and turned, and stood when she realised it was Jack. She leant into him, taking his hand in her own. -------------------------- After the cemetery Jack had headed home, saying to Martha he needed to be alone for a while. She’d agreed, saying she’d be on the beach. Now, two hours later, he hadn’t let her know it was okay to come home so she decided to head to the diner, to get a drink for Isabel. ------------------------- Jack frowned as he walked along the beach, at every pace expecting to see a little dark haired girl with her mum. But she was nowhere to be found. What if something had happened? What if they’d been like his dad, both victims in a vicious assault? He looked around, getting more desperate as time went on. He spotted Alf “Have you seen Martha anywhere?” he asked, worried. “She’s in the diner with young Isabel. Isabel was complaining about being thirsty, so she took her for a drink. She told me to tell you, so I was on my way to.” He said. “Oh okay, so if I heard to the diner I’ll find her?” He asked. “Yeah mate. Don’t worry she’s there.” He promised Jack. “Thanks.” He said, hurrying up to the diner. He was relieved when he saw Martha sitting outside with Isabel, both with a drink in front of them. “Hey Jack.” Martha said, smiling as they came closer. “Hey. I was worried about you two.” Jack said, picking Isabel up and sitting where she sat, placing her on his lap. “Sorry, but Isa wanted to come to the diner.” She said, tickling Isabel’s stomach. “It’s okay. I just, panicked.” He said with a sigh. “Trust me, nothing’s going to happen to us.” She assured him. --------------------------------- “How was work?” Martha asked later that day, smiling at him as he walked in. “It was alright.” He said, smiling at her. “That’s good.” She said, smiling back. Suddenly Peter came to the door “Jack.” He said, looking at him. “What’s going on?” Jack asked, knowing something was happening because he’d just come from the station. “We just got a call. It appears that Ash hasn’t checked in for a day, they thought it was nothing but they can’t contact him. So we have every reason to believe that he’s back in the bay.” He answered, looking at Martha. “Oh god.” She said softly. “Apparently he’s been talking about you a lot, Martha. So you’re going to have to be extra careful, so are you Jack.” He said, looking straight at him too. “I will.” He promised. “You’ve been given time off work till we can find him.” He promised. NEXT UPDATE: Will Ash be found? What does Martha discover about herself? PLEASE RATE AND REVIEW!
gawguss_tiff Posted January 21, 2007 Report Posted January 21, 2007 ooo i wonder what martha discovers and o god i hope they find ash i serioulsy hate him in this fic lol poor everyone still sad about tony's dead :( well excellent chapter miss paris update asap xxoxo
-ParaisGal- Posted January 21, 2007 Report Posted January 21, 2007 What Tiff thinks may be right, may be wrong.
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