amz89 Posted January 31, 2007 Report Posted January 31, 2007 Sorry I didnt write that all at once I pressed it once & it came out 4 times I really sorry
-ParaisGal- Posted January 31, 2007 Report Posted January 31, 2007 Don't worry. I've done that before
Sarah_Lewis Posted January 31, 2007 Report Posted January 31, 2007 That last chapter was awesome Paris !! Update soon !
-ParaisGal- Posted February 1, 2007 Report Posted February 1, 2007 Chapter Sixteen. Martha stood, staring at the photo that Lara held in her hand. A happy snap of her and Jack. So many thoughts were rushing through her head that she could barely control them. She couldn’t be being targeted. So much for Ash coming back to make amends. He obviously wanted something. That something was obviously Martha. Jack immediately hurried to Martha’s side, his gaze off the photo and now onto his wife. He knew by the look on her face she was in a state of complete shock, and he couldn’t blame her. Ash was no longer the boyish teenager Jack had known all those years ago. Now, he didn’t feel safe with him being in the same country as them. ----------- “What do you reckon he has planned?” McGrath asked Peter quietly outside the house. “Who knows what he has planned, but obviously he’s not happy. He’s broken into a house, already up to break and enter and already on a warning. It’s not looking good for Ashton Nader, and obviously he knows that, judging by his disappearance.” Peter said, looking at the doorway as he spoke in a muted voice. “So Martha’s definitely the person he’s after?” “Obviously she is. He loved Martha, everyone could see that. Then he turned violent, so maybe we shouldn’t risk her life. At least two people need to be around her at all times, for her own safety.” Peter ordered, looking straight at McGrath. “Holden being one of them?” McGrath asked. “We could use him on the case but I know he couldn’t be much good, worrying about Martha, so yes I’d say he’d be better off around her. Besides, he can protect them if necessary.” “Alright, I’ll sort it out.” ----------- “It’ll be alright love.” Alf said to her later that night, at the pad “He’ll be caught then you’ll be fine.” Alf assured her. “But what if he’s not caught grandad? What will I do? I’m pregnant grandad, what if he harms the baby?” Martha whimpered, her voice full of her fear. “He will get caught.” Came Jack’s voice from the shadows. “Alright, I’m going to leave now.” Alf said, heading out the door with a wave, and a worried glance at Martha. Martha turned around, Jack had been bathing Isabel but now he was back, holding the sleepy three year old in his arms “Jack.” She said softly. “He will get caught.” Jack said forcefully “I’m not letting him anywhere near you.” He said, moving from the shadows, nearer her. Martha closely observed her husband. His face was different. It looked fierce, and it was a look she didn’t like “Jack, what’s with that face?” She asked, pulling back from him slightly. He was scaring her, ever so slightly. Jack noticed her pull back and mentally kicked himself “Sorry.” He apologised to her, his face slowly returning back to normal “I’m just paranoid something will happen to you. I can’t lose any of you. I can’t lose the baby, Isabel or you.” He said seriously. She relaxed, and leaned into him “It’s alright.” She sighed, snuggling into him closer “I just hate this.” She said, looking at Isabel on the floor, playing with her toys in the dim light. “I hate it as well. And Peter said that if it will help, we might be able to get some cops watching the place.” He said, looking down at her as she lay on him. “I don’t want him out there Jack. Before when he was there, I didn’t mind as much. This time he’s obviously out there for revenge.” “He doesn’t want revenge against you. He wants it against me.” Jack answered her. “I don’t want him to want revenge against either of us!” She exclaimed, looking straight at him “Stay away from Ashton Nader, he’s extremely bad news.” She said, staring at him “Promise me Jack!” She ordered him. “I can’t keep that promise.” He said evenly. “If you don’t, you won’t like the repercussions.” She said firmly. “I want and need to protect you Martha. I’m not letting him near you. He did so many horrible things to you! He threw things at your head, he bashed you up, stuff that I couldn’t believe he’d ever be capable of. So if I see a chance to get him out of our lives I’ll take it, I swear that I’ll take it.” He said, then noticing Martha’s cold expression. “If you do that, if you harm him, then I won’t go near you. I can’t be around violent people.” She snapped angrily at him. That made Jack stop. He remembered how Martha had regained her trust in him so quickly because she knew he wouldn’t harm her. He looked at her. “See, I told you that you’d not like what became of you’re actions.” She said quietly, standing up and walking out the front door. NEXT UPDATE: Who does Martha meet on her wandering? PLEASE RATE AND REVIEW!
Tasha Posted February 1, 2007 Report Posted February 1, 2007 please not Ashton Nadar. God i hate that idiot. And whats wrong with Jacky, his such a loser gosh. More please
-lolly- Posted February 1, 2007 Report Posted February 1, 2007 She better not meet Ashton! Or else Paris.. You updated! Very proud of you hehe. More soon
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