-ParaisGal- Posted February 1, 2007 Report Posted February 1, 2007 I'm out of writers block it seems. Been in writers block for a while now. No idea what to write about I was so upset lol.
gawguss_tiff Posted February 1, 2007 Report Posted February 1, 2007 ok so lets get something straight Isabel is NOT Ash's AND Martha WILL NOT see Ash on her walk OK lol that was a great chapter miss paris i loved it Jack loves her sooo much its so great lol update ASAP xxoxx
Zetti Posted February 1, 2007 Report Posted February 1, 2007 i love this episode! u are so good and this fic is awesome keep it up!
baby gurl Posted February 1, 2007 Report Posted February 1, 2007 little miz paris...if she meets ash on her wonders then I will not be a happy person on msn....you remember that....great update...more soon please. x
baby gurl Posted February 1, 2007 Report Posted February 1, 2007 little miz paris...if she meets ash on her wonders then I will not be a happy person on msn....you remember that....great update...more soon please. x
xsianx Posted February 2, 2007 Report Posted February 2, 2007 Ash!!!! Can I say I was quite scared reading that chapter lol one part scared me the most : “He will get caught.” Came Jack’s voice from the shadows. I was imaging a horror movie like, where the girl is alone,in a dark forrest and the killer comes out of the showers to stab her to death or whatever. Jacky! I knwo your angry but don't ruin Ash's hair.
amz89 Posted February 2, 2007 Report Posted February 2, 2007 Loved that chapter, nice writting cant wait for more!!
-ParaisGal- Posted February 3, 2007 Report Posted February 3, 2007 Chapter Seventeen. Martha sighed as she walked down the beach path, looking at the stars out behind the waves that the beach slowly brought into the shore. How had her life become such a mess, she didn’t know. She sat down, the feel of the sand amongst her fingers soothing her instantly. “You shouldn’t be out here alone.” Came a voice near her. Martha leapt up, her heart beating fast. Sure enough, Ash was in front of her. Wait, no, two people were. One was grinning at her “Get away from me.” She snapped, walking backwards towards up the beach, towards the beachside Diner, which she knew was still open. “Oh shut it.” The second person, a woman, snapped at her. “Why?” Ash asked Martha, ignoring the woman as he started walking towards Martha “I’ve not done anything for you to order me away.” He said, shrugging. “Yes you have.” She said, trying to keep the fear out of her voice “You abused me Ash!” She said, glaring coldly at him “I can’t have you near me or my family. Leave Jack, me and Isabel alone, understand?” She said, trying to stay far away from him. “I never got around to asking if she was my kid, but I’m guessing she is judging by her age. Why’d you hide her from me Martha?” He asked her softly. “She’s not your daughter! Tests were done to prove that!” She snapped, her sandy feet hitting the pavement, causing her to wince slightly “So stay away from her!” She demanded. “Well, I haven’t seen the results so I don’t know she’s not mine. I won’t know until I see.” He said, taking a chance and lunging for her, grabbing her arm. Martha wrenched her arm from his grasp, feeling the fear run through her body again. This couldn’t be happening. She wouldn’t let him get her “Stay the hell away from me!” She snapped, turning and rushing towards the diner, only to be grabbed from behind by him “Get away!” She screamed at him. “No.” He said calmly, grabbing her and dragging her along after him. He turned to the red head by his side “That worked pretty well.” He commented to her, after locking Martha in the van and ignoring her protests. “Yes it did.” Sam agreed “It was good working with you.” Sam said, extending her hand. “Likewise. I got my girlfriend and you got your boyfriend. Exactly how it should be.” He said, before getting into the driver’s seat of the van, as Sam got into the passenger seat. “We need to time this perfectly.” Sam said, ignoring the screaming in the back of the van “We need to get her away, far enough away. What do you want to do with her?” She asked him as he started the van. “Depends on how she goes. If she’s really not co-operating and not worth it, probably dump her. Try to get Jack to leave the bay as soon as you can. And without a trace, preferably.” “Too right. And she’d better not come back to the bay!” She warned “If somehow Jack catches wind of what’s going on, then..” “I know I know. I lose her.” He muttered, driving fast past the Summer Bay sign “But I’m beginning to wonder if it’ll be good to lose her. She’s been doing a lot of whining.” He added, checking the mirror on the stolen van. “I know. She’s always been a pretty bad whiner. Don’t worry the Bay’s better without her. Drop her off, if you decide to, as far away as possible.” Sam said, grinning as they pulled into the second place, where a hidden car was. She jumped out, this time herself taking the driver’s seat, leaving Ash in the van “Remember, dump the van really quick. If they catch on, then you’re gone.” She said, starting the car and driving off, heading back in the direction of Summer Bay. ------------ “She should be back by now.” Jack asked, worried later that night. “She’ll come soon mate, don’t worry.” Tony assured him, he’d come over to see Martha and found she wasn’t home so decided to stay till she got home. “What if something’s happened dad? I know she wouldn’t leave, I hope she hasn’t, anyway.” He added darkly. NEXT CHAPTER: Will Sam make her move? And what becomes of Martha and her unborn baby? PLEASE RATE AND REVIEW!
Tasha Posted February 3, 2007 Report Posted February 3, 2007 I hate you Paris, i really do. If anything happens to Martha or Baby Holden, or even Jacky or Isabel, you'll be in heaps of trouble.
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