One More Chance

[vale4eva]

Oh no! poor jacky and martha!

Sam and Ash are like bad smells, why cant they just go away

loving all your fics paris! keep up the good work

Im Rachel btw

[BritishFan]

What an absolute awesome fic Paris...you write so well.:D

Please don't let Ash and Sam harm Mac or lil baby Holden.

Jack has to get wind that she has been kidnapped and go and find and rescue Mac.

PLEASE PLEASE!!

Please update soon

Hayley

xxx

[Zetti]

v good update!!!

[-Laura-]

Grrr to Ash and Sam! Why cant they just leave Martha and Jack alone to be happy! Hope Jack finds Martha soon and her and the baby are ok! Update soon!

[amz89]

You better not make anything wrong with Martha & Baby Holden, or Jack & Izzy!! Can't wait for next chapter!!

[baby gurl]

I hate you Paris, i really do. If anything happens to Martha or Baby Holden, or even Jacky or Isabel, you'll be in heaps of trouble.

i agree nothing can happen to the Holden family...other wise you own't be happy on msn! update soon...xx

[gawguss_tiff]

Paris!! thats no fair if you make something bad happen to the baby something REALLY bad will happen in my fic -evil laugh- and you wouldnt want that to happen now would you? lol great update huni

UPDATE ASAP

xoxox

[-ParaisGal-]

Chapter Twenty.

“It’s alright baby girl.” Jack said softly to Isabel as she awoke from a bad dream “Mummy will come home soon. I hope she will.” He said, clinging to the dark haired toddler. It had been a month since Martha’s disappearance, and nobody had heard from her. Everyone knew she hadn’t upped and left, because if she had she probably would have taken her beloved daughter with her, and she wouldn’t have left Jack. She loved him too much. And she wouldn’t have left while she was pregnant. She’d never have done that, she’d had troubles with her first pregnancy, and there was a high chance she’d have trouble with this one.

“Hey Jack.” Luc greeted him, heading into the room.

“Hey.” Jack said back, unsmiling as he usually was these days. He was missing Martha terribly.

“She’ll be okay Jack.” Luc said, trying to help Jack remain positive.

“She’s nearly six months pregnant Luc! She’s out there with a maniac.”

“We don’t know for sure he’s got her Jack!” Luc said, hoping that Jack would begin to see reason.

“We got that letter. You know what letter I’m talking about. I’ve already lost dad I can’t lose her as well!” He said, his vocal volume rising with every second he began this argument with his brother.

“It’ll be okay.” He said, putting a hand on Jack’s shoulder.

“Jack?” Came a voice from the door.

Jack turned, feeling disgust creep inside of him like someone had just vomited in front of him “What the hell are you doing here Sam?” He demanded of her.

“I just came to see you. It’s been ages, I haven’t seen anyone for the bay in months so how are things? How’s Martha?” She asked, smiling at him as she entered the house, her mind telling her that he’d be coming to her soon.

“Martha has been gone for a month, Ash kidnapped her.” Jack said coldly.

“How do you know Ash kidnapped her?” She asked, her heart having stopped as the smile faded from her face. Nobody was meant to know that Ash did it, if they did they may link them together, seeing as they had been in a decent relationship, they’d even been engaged for a while.

“Because it figures. The guy stops showing up for his daily check and she disappears. And she’s also getting quite heavily pregnant.”

“She’s pregnant?” Sam said, guilt slowly creeping into her brain but she brushed it aside effortlessly.

“She’s nearly six months, and I miss her and love her so much which is why I’m gunna ask you to leave. Get out Sam, you’re never going to be welcome here again.”

“You’ll regret that.” She called over her shoulder, smirking as she left Jack’s house.

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“We have a problem.” Sam spat at Ash as she joined him at his house.

“What’s that?” Ash asked “If it’s Martha being a complete bitch then that’s one hell of a problem. You don’t have to live with her, I do.”

“I’m sure you’ve discovered she’s pregnant.” Sam stated, looking straight at him.

“Uh, well, now Sam.” He stuttered, leaving Sam to groan in despair.

“How can you not notice that she was getting steadily fatter as the days went by? Guys do not notice anything!” She said furiously, glaring at him.

“Well I haven’t exactly been allowed near her! She claws my eyes out every time I approach her!” He protested.

“Anyway, whatever. Are you going to dump her?” She asked him, noticing that Martha was starting to yell out again.

“Probably. She’s not much good to me.”

“You’d better not have started abusing her again Ashton! If Jack finds out about the fact that I’ve been in this with you I’ll be in pretty bad trouble. If he finds we abused and neglected his precious wife it’ll be even worse for us.”

“Well, the trouble we can handle because she won’t be found.” He said confidently.

“Seeing as you’re so stupid as to believe that she won’t be found, because judging by you’re hiding skills.” She said, indicating to the country house around them “She’ll be found within minutes.” She said.

“What’s your point?” He said, a bit hurt she’d decided his skills weren’t very useful.

“My point is, what if they never find her?” She asked him, a grin forming on her face.

“You just insulted my skills, then complimented them.” He said slowly.

“Do you want to know my point?” She snapped.

“Yes.” He mumbled.

“What if she’s not alive when they find her?”

PLEASE RATE AND REVIEW!

[~Rosey~]

Can I kill Ash? Or could Martha do it for me

Lol. I dont think i've read this fic forwahile.

Btw, cobgradualtions on getting 1000 posts

[-ParaisGal-]

Thanks Rosey :-)