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One More Chance


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No! Sam cannot be released. I don't care if there's no evidence they can just lock her in a cell and forget all about her :) *takes deep breath*

She continued staring out into the ocean, she didn’t seem to have registered that her husband was beside her. Her eyes showed a blank, her body wasn’t reacting to Jack’s hold.

He saw her distance, her blankness, and behind it he saw what other people, people like Peter, McGrath, everyone wouldn’t be able to see. Her pain and hurt, something she was trying to hide from them “Please talk to me.” He whispered, his face close to hers. Again she showed him nothing but a blank. She wasn’t dealing with any of this, and he could see it. He turned her face towards his, not even gaining a blink from her “Please.” He pleaded with her.

^Great descriptions of Martha's emotions!

Jack was so sweet in that chapter. I loved it :)

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i agree!! seriously miz paris if sam/kyle whatever her name is comes near Martha, Jack and the kids then i will not only hurt her then i won't *thinks* ever talk to you again :P lol...brilliant chapter loved it when they were trying to get jack to tell them what martha said jacks reactions were so funny!!! you gotta update reall soon you know like now!! xxx

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Aww, im glad she told Jack. But Sams not going down, oh great! (sense the sarcasm!)

Dont let anything happen to Martha, shes been through so much already, i dont spose she can take much more :(

Anyway, great chapter :)

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Just caught up on a load of chapters and its all really good! Glad Martha, Jack and the children are now reunited but wish Sam would just go away for good! Grrr! Hope she doesnt harm Martha or any of them again! Update soon! :)

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Yes get your voo doo doll Sian! I will donate some pins!

Grr Sam can't target Martha, why can't she just take a hint and go away!

That was a really beautiful chapter though, your writing was amazing! Can't wait to see more!

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