loobieloo Posted December 13, 2006 Report Posted December 13, 2006 Lol Thanks you two, yeah Aaron, I thought we were lacking in abit of Martha/Macca-ness... so And the second chapter is coming along quite well
loobieloo Posted December 13, 2006 Report Posted December 13, 2006 Ok so a few things you should know that I didnt really explain very well in the first chapter :: 1. Martha is 16 and Macca is 17, I didnt know the real age gap, so i made it up myself 2. Marthas new boyfriend is called Jack but he has nothing to do with Jack Holden, why he is called Jack will come into it later on 3. They still live on a farm with their mum and dad 4. they do have 2 other brothers greg and davie who hae moved away and are older but may come into it later on Okay I think thats it for now Chapter 2 - you lucky lucky people Chapter 2 It was now 4PM and Macca had been waiting by the school gates For Martha for half an hour, and he was starting to worry. Her exams were well over by now, he knew that, he had seen all her friends come out a while ago, but Martha was no where to be seen. He decided to go back into the school and see if she was there, he only hoped she hadn’t gone home and forgotten to wait, if she had he promised himself he had to get her back later. As he walked down the corridor towards Martha’s locker, he saw them. So this was him, her new boyfriend. He didn’t look to bad, just watching them kiss made him feel uncomfortable, Macca watched as the boy’s hand explored further up Martha’s thigh….Thats it! He couldn’t handle seeing someone that close to his baby sister. “Oi! Get your hands off her! Right NOW!” He shouted at the shocked boy. “Macca!” Martha cried, feeling very embarrassed. “Don’t be like that! You haven’t even met Jack yet!” “I don’t need to have met him Martha, You’ve not been going out long enough for his hands to be going where they were going right now!” “Don’t tell me what we can and cant do Macca! You don’t rule me!” “No I don’t, but its not right, you’ve only been going out a couple of days” “Mate” Jack finally spoke, “Its ok, she doesn’t mind do ya babe?” He asked Martha “No, of course not” she answered, pulling his hand up and placing it back onto her thigh before capturing his lips on hers again. “Come on! Youre coming home!” Macca tried to grab Martha but she shook him off “Nah, go without me, tell mum I’m at…..umm… Maths club to get better at it” “No Martha, if youre not coming with me I’ll just have to tell dad where you are really, im sure he will be very excited for you” Ok so this argument had gotten too far, Macca knew he would never tell his dad about this, he just didn’t feel comfortable with this Jack dude’s hands on Martha. “Urgh” Martha let out a loud sigh and pulled away from Jack, “See ya later” She blew him a kiss before walking off with her brother. When they were out of the school gates and on their way home Martha started to shout at Macca “How dare you! How dare you embarrass me like that! And in front of Jack!” “I didn’t do it to just embarrass you, it isn’t right that you’re so close after a couple of days Martha, what’s next? sex?” Martha gasped, “Well that’s nice to know, my own brother thinks I’m a dirty slut! Well thanks, big confidence booster that is! Walk on your own!” She shouted at him and stormed off ahead, the tears building up in her eyes. When Macca arrived home, Martha had already gone out into one of the fields to help their mum with some things so he didn’t even get a chance to apologise and explain himself. Then again, why should he? He hadn’t done anything wrong! “No” he thought to himself “ she should be the one to apologise to me I didn’t do anything wrong” and with that he stomped upstairs to his bedroom. Please comment
xsianx Posted December 13, 2006 Report Posted December 13, 2006 Haven't read *sorry* doing coursework, will read later and give you a nice comment. Tut Tut! Lol well I'll look forward to that I read it I love the Macca/Martha joking and messing around. Good writing! Sorry didn't see the second chapter! Haha, lol Love Macca
>>Emma<< Posted December 13, 2006 Report Posted December 13, 2006 Another great chapter Lora! And aren't we lucky to get 2 updates in 1 night!!! Please update soon, hope Macca and Martha make up! Fab, more soon
loobieloo Posted December 13, 2006 Report Posted December 13, 2006 Thanks Em The next chapter should be tomorrow, you all have the right to bug me to death for it
aejdude Posted December 13, 2006 Report Posted December 13, 2006 Yes we are lucky! I loved that chapter, i knew if martha was getting held up it wouldn't be because of anything else but a boy! I think you portrayed Macca's point of view very well! Can't wait for more. Update soon.
beckyboo Posted December 13, 2006 Report Posted December 13, 2006 Hey BOB (I aint called you that in while lol) Great chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Cant wait to read the rest!!!!!!!!!! Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well not soon more like ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[.jessa-belle.] Posted December 14, 2006 Report Posted December 14, 2006 Ohhhh Great fic So his name is Jack, but its not our Jacky?? Will jacky (our Jacky) be coming into it soon, and sweeping Mac of her feet Great Chapter Update Soon
gawguss_tiff Posted December 14, 2006 Report Posted December 14, 2006 wow i loved this it was great lol aww i wish this jack was jack holden lol well UPDATE ASAP
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