No Clouds

[~Rosey~]

Pretty good so far

Cant wait untill the 2nd chapter.

P.s - Stop chasing me!!

[Jacksthehottest]

I dont like Jack, well i like Jack Holden just not that Jack. He better be coming into the fic soon (Jack Holden). I juts caught up on the chapters. I love how Macca and Martha are so close, its cute. Please update soon, can't wait to read more

[loobieloo]

thanks for the lovely comments guys, glad you like it. and you're all just going to have to wait and see if jack holden does come into it the next chapter should be up by tomorrow but that's not definate

[Adia]

oooh, I can't wait. I really like the Macca and Martha relationship, I've always wanted to see more of that. Please update soon!

[Chair]

Thanks, Laura. I hope that Macca and Martha can sort things out.

[loobieloo]

Sort ish chapter guys

Chapter 3

“I love you Martha” Jack whispered into her ear, “Lets make tonight really special”

“What did you have in mind?” Martha asked melting under his touch

“you know…” He said softly to her as he lead her into the bedroom.

They had spent the evening at Jack’s, his parents were out so they had the house to themselves. Martha had an idea all along what Jack would want to do to tonight, and she didn’t know weather she was ready when she thought of it, but it just happened, and she didn’t really do a lot of thinking while it was actually happening. It was only after, when she realised it was a mistake. She didn’t want jack to think of her as a baby, everyone else had sex, it want a big thing. If she made a big deal out of it he would break up with her for sure, and she didn’t want that. She lay there, next to him just waiting for him to wake up before she could leave. Maybe she could make an excuse about having to be home early and get away but she didn’t think Jack would fall for something as stupid as that.

“Martha?” Jack slowly began to wake up and let out a long yawn.

“Yeah, I’m here” She answered trying to sound calm and collected, yet her voice still came out a bit panicky

“What’s up babe? Did you have fun before?”

“Yeah course.” She sighed, “I’ll have to go home soon though” trying to sound sad about going home just didn’t work, as Jack sat up and continued questioning her.

“What’s the matter?”

“Nothing babe, why?” She was really starting to panic now, what if shed done something wrong?

“You aren’t acting yourself, are you okay?”

“Yeah, but I really have to go now”

“What? Stay for another hour, can’t you stay over?”

“No sorry, my mum wants me back for 11, I’ll come and see you tomorrow though ok?” She had an idea what was coming next, this was why he was acting “off” with her, jack had a reputation for this, she just didn’t think he’d do it to her.

“Actually, you don’t have to bother, Martha you’re a great girl and all that but well, I don’t think its working, I’m sorry.” He smiled at her

“What?” she really couldn’t believe her ears

“Oh you can let yourself out cant you? Bye, see you in school!” he said and turned over in bed, trying to get asleep again.

“Hold on. What?” She had to make sure she’d heard him right, “What did you just say?”

“It’s just not working out Martha” he sounded so smug

“Sex! Sex! It was all about sex wasn’t it? Argh! You make me so angry! I cant believe I let myself fall for you when that was all you were after!” She felt a tear run down her cheek as she grabbed her things hastily, got dressed and ran out of the house.

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[baby gurl]

aaaaawww you posted it!!!! yaaaaaayyyyy! when i read it on msn i loved it and i just read it again!!! why do i get the feeling that jack's joking about with her?? you gotta update sooooooooon, laura.....xx

[loobieloo]

Lol Thanks And Jack isn't joking with her

[baby gurl]

Lol Thanks And Jack isn't joking with her

wait till i get my hands on him....*gets fists ready*

[-ParaisGal-]

That wasn't Jack Holden, was it Lola? It better not have been Jack, he'd better come in. Make her like, 18 then they can go out

I call Loobieloo Lola lol.