No Clouds

[>>Emma<<]

Lora that was fabby, please please please don't stop, I love it! That was a great chapter and I can't wait to see what her Mum says - when you update

Please please please update again, and soon

[loobieloo]

LOL youre not getting an update, no one reads so theres no point sorry em

[xsianx]

Sian reads so you must carry on

[loobieloo]

Lol sorry Sian but Im not, its not worth it, some people wont even take the time to read it

[>>Emma<<]

Please please Lora *begs* please...

[loobieloo]

lol maybe

[>>Emma<<]

Yay a maybe is better than a no...

[Chair]

Thanks, Laura. I'm reading it as well and I had known it was a different Jack in this fanfic from your explanation. I really hope that you will update.

[-ParaisGal-]

Lola dear, you must update. lol. If you dont, I will know. Bring HOLDEN in.

[Tasha]

Poor Martha. When does Jacky Holden come into the story, he'll treat Martha like a princess ( i hope) bring him in and get rid of this stupid random Jack Great chapter. When Martha said "im late" i just thought, crap she's pregnant, then i realised she just slept with the loser the night before. Maybe she will get preggers, and her parents will send her to live with Alf and Morag in SB and then she'll meet our beloved Jack

Please update soon