gawguss_tiff Posted December 19, 2006 Report Posted December 19, 2006 you have to update i love this fic and damn it guys i thought it had been updated lol but anyways please update
Jacksthehottest Posted December 19, 2006 Report Posted December 19, 2006 Awwww poor Martha, she doesn't deserve this. Please continue this fic, i want to read more
loobieloo Posted December 20, 2006 Report Posted December 20, 2006 Ok you guys who are actually reading this are lucky, I'm really bored! So the next chapter is getting written lol. Im actually quite proud of myself for this fic, the updates arent too bad, my problem is that I get bored with fics thou so instead of completing the ones i start, I start new ones
gawguss_tiff Posted December 21, 2006 Report Posted December 21, 2006 lol excellent update soon cant wait <3 Tiff
>>Emma<< Posted December 22, 2006 Report Posted December 22, 2006 Oh yes it's not ending - you made the right decision Lora
beckyboo Posted December 23, 2006 Report Posted December 23, 2006 Laura I want an update Please update im sick so it will make me feel better Please hurry up and update xxxxxxxxxxxxx
loobieloo Posted December 28, 2006 Report Posted December 28, 2006 Oh guys arent you excited? heres the next chapter!!! Its very long, and thank you to Becky for giving me a huge hand in writing it Chapter...? i dno lol "This is it”, Martha thought to herself, ” I have to tell her it all" “You will hate me” she told her mother “What?” ,she shook her head, “I could never hate you, you’re my little girl” her mum reassured her calmly. With that, Martha prepared herself to tell her mother the truth, she knew there would be consequences, but as long as she told her everything, she was sure they couldn’t be too bad. “Well”, she began sighing, this was going to take a long time, “I have been seeing this guy Jack for a while and well I though things were pretty serious”. “And now you and this Jack guy have broken up and that’s why your so upset” Her mother finished off. “Martha, boys break up with girls all the time you know, it’s not really a big deal. Its not something that you should miss school for now is it? It happens to everyone you know, I got dumped when I was in high school too. And the best part, was that I got to do it right back!” She laughed before noticing Martha’s worried expression. “I wish that was all it was mum, I really do” Martha said quietly “What is it then?” her mother asked, clearly concerned “I Slept with him last night and” Martha blurted out before the tears slid down her cheeks “You what?” He mother shouted at her, she couldn’t believe what her daughter had done. “I slept with him” Martha said it again quietly “Yes, I heard you the first time, Martha your 16” she shouted at her, Martha was beginning to get angry “And im legal” she stated “So let me guess then this Jack lad bedded you, got his leg over and then dumped you” her mother tutted “and I thought me and your father made it very clear to you, you were not to have a boyfriend until you were at least 17”. Her mother made her way out of her room and went to talk to her father. “Well we can’t let her get away with this Ray what will people think of us?” Jane asked Ray. “I know Jane”, he paused for thought, “but what are we supposed to do?” “There’s only one thing to do” Jane knew what had to be done “And that is?” he asked, not being able o think of what it was she wanted to do. “Send her away” she replied “What? Were? Jane we can’t send her away!” Ray said shocked that his wife could even think such a thing. “To my sister Joan” her mother said “Are you crazy woman?” Ray asked “No, she’s going Ray and that’s that! Now who’s going to be the one to tell her?”. *************************************************** “Martha where are you?” Macca returned home, furious. “What? I’m up here” she shouted back casually “I don’t believe you!” he shouted at her “What have I done this time? Not put a DVD back or something” she asked him rolling her eyes “Sleeping with Jack Morgan!” he shouted yet again, his anger rising “What? How do you no that? Did mum tell you” she asked panicking “No, Liam did” he replied “What? Well how does Liam know?” she asked starting to get upset. “Marth the whole school knows” Macca informed her Martha’s mobile rang, it was Becca, one of her best friends from school “Great another I told you so” she sighed “Hey Bec, what’s up?” Martha asked, knowing what she was about to say and thinking that one of her best mates hated her. ”Mac, I was so worried about you after I heard what that jerk had done to you are you ok?” Becca asked, she had been worrying about Martha ever since she heard the news “Yeah I’m fine but I had to tell my mum about it” Martha said before looking back up at Macca, and noticing his impatient expression, “Ill call you later Bec me and Macca were in the middle of something ok bye” Martha said before hanging up. “Macca what’s everyone saying about me” she asked him, clearly scared of the reply she was about to receive. “Just that you a slut and slapper that goes with anyone who’s in the mood for it.” He paused, “and you know Martha? It’s the truth! I am actually ashamed to call you my sister!” Macca left the room, he didn’t mean what he had said, he was just angry with her, his job, as her brother, was to protect her, and he had failed that. He had let her get involved with Jack Morgan. With Macca’s words ringing through her ears, she once again began to cry ,he had never said anything like that to her never before and it broke her heart. ******************************************** “Martha, can you come down here now please?” Her dad shouted up to her. Martha slumped down the stairs and sat at the dining table, opposite her parents. “Now Martha, seeing as the whole of your school knows about you and this Jack guy, its not long before the parents find out and the head and you know what the small town talk is like, so me and your father have decided” her mother was cut off by her fathers angry tone, “You mean what you have decided Jane” “Ray please, let me finish”, she looked back to Martha, “you’re going to go and live with your auntie Joan” Her mother explained to her, bracing herself for Martha’s reaction, she knew it wasn’t going to be good. “What? No way!” Martha told them sternly “You don’t get a say young lady after the way you behaved! You are a disgrace to our family, and you’re nothing but a….” her mother trailed off, stopping herself from saying something she would regret later. “What was that mum? Oh I know, nothing but a cheap slut, slapper, and tart” Martha screamed “And I cant believe you’re treating me like this, you’re supposed to be my family, you know all that ‘families stick together and support each other’ crap, none of that applies here does it? You have no idea how much I am hurting right now, you haven’t even bothered to ask! All you care about is what people think. Well I don’t! I don’t give a damn about anyone anymore, stuff all of you!” she ran upstairs, crying with anger and hurt. ******************************************************** Please review
beckyboo Posted December 28, 2006 Report Posted December 28, 2006 Well very good Laura Even if i do say so myself Update ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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