Arachnophobia (by emmasi) - comments

[~Rosey~]

It made sense to me.

I hoep you continue!!

Who was the person though? Like the *cant think of a name* the person who was with Martha?

Sorry if i'm confusing you

[emmasi]

I didn't give him a name, which just confused matters. The closest I got was "some random criminal" and "that guy." My feeling was it wasn't important who he was because he wasn't the thing Jack was afraid of. Obviously I should have thought a little harder about that . He wasn't really meant to be anyone in particular. Just some guy with a knife. Deep

[loobieloo]

lol Actually, reading it again, it does make sence, it was probaby just me being slow

[foxychic99]

lol i dont understand phobias lol what a wimp lol

[xxgulcanxx]

I loved it i hope you continue

[>>Emma<<]

That was great, I loved it, and I found it funny when Jack screamed! Made total sense to me...I think

Please continue, this is great!

[xGlowingAngelx]

Being someone who is petrified of Spiders, I can totally see where Jack is coming from, I can't go anywhere near a spider without panicking. That aside, I'll admit I did laugh. Not because he was afraid but because it was a funny fic. I give you full credit for dealing with such a fear. It was also a lovely change to read a fic of such a different style. Great writing!

[Nicom]

I didn't get confused... I thought you were referring to the spider as a "he" on purpose, to emphasise that it was very important to Jack. And I liked how you did the criminal as "that guy" too, showing that Jack wasn't really that bothered about who the criminal that was holding his wife at knife point was... It really made it seem like to me Martha and this Criminal were blurry in the background, and Jack and the Spider in the foreground. That's another reason why I really liked it. It was written superbly.

I'm babbling.

[baby gurl]

i agree with nicole....that was funny!!

[SfanS]

I had a bit of a mental picture...a spider slitting Mart'ha's throat?

I did work it out eventually, but it was so funny, the pictures that went through my head! *falls out of chair laughing*