xsianx Posted February 26, 2007 Report Posted February 26, 2007 Jumping on beds- ahh the good ol days I cut my head open once in a car crash
vale4eva Posted February 26, 2007 Report Posted February 26, 2007 I cut my head open once in a car crash Oh my god Sian thats horrible, and scary Great chapter Paris, Marthas finally showing signs of recovery. Pitty Rachel had to come in and ruin it all, even if it was an accident. Hopefully youl get over this writers block soon
beckyboo Posted February 26, 2007 Report Posted February 26, 2007 Great chapter Martha can do somethings with Jack shes getting better Update soon xxxx
gawguss_tiff Posted February 26, 2007 Report Posted February 26, 2007 lol paris you were jumping on your bed? lol... i havent done that in ages lol ... poor martha things just keep going crappy for her... i want her to get out of the whellchair already o and go you 3 updates in one day lol great chapter huni UPDATE ASAP xoxox
xsianx Posted February 27, 2007 Report Posted February 27, 2007 I cut my head open once in a car crash Oh my god Sian thats horrible, and scary Great chapter Paris, Marthas finally showing signs of recovery. Pitty Rachel had to come in and ruin it all, even if it was an accident. Hopefully youl get over this writers block soon It was. The guy was speeding and crashed into the back of the car I was in. He had just robbed somewhere and was speeding away.. Silly man. Stupid man.
-ParaisGal- Posted March 4, 2007 Report Posted March 4, 2007 Chapter Twenty Four. “It feels weird.” Martha said to Jack, leaning heavily on the crutches, and smiling at Jack’s arms that were around her body, yet not touching her. He was certain he’d catch her if she fell, which she reminded him she didn’t plan on doing. “I’m sure it does.” Jack nodded “It feels different, seeing you walk after like, nearly twelve months.” He told her honestly. “Gee, thanks. I’m sure you’d rather see me up and about rather than stuck in that depressing chair, right?” She asked, facing him as she took very slow steps around the room. “I’m sure I’d rather see you moving around as well. I’m betting that one thing you’re desperate to do would be to chase around Ruby?” He asked her, watching her movements carefully. “One of the first things, yes. Another would be you and me walking along the beach, hand in hand, probably getting your mother to mind our children.” She grinned “I’ve barely seen the beach at all.” She said, shrugging to herself. “We could always go after we’ve finished up here.” Jack said slowly, grinning at her. “How would I get around Jack?” Martha said softly. “Simple, I pull you along in the waves.” “Are you serious?” She gasped, looking in shock. “Of course I’m damn serious. I wouldn’t say something like that and not go through with it. You’d divorce me on the spot.” He said, poking his tongue out at her. “I could divorce you now, it’d be easier.” She said, turning away then grinning back at him. “Divorce me and I kill you.” He said seriously. “Do I detect sarcasm there?” She asked hopefully. “No.” ----- “I’m so slow.” Martha muttered at the beach, she was holding onto Jack as he helped her walk across the beach. “You’re doing great.” Jack assured her, holding her tightly next to him “Besides, we can just pretend we’re having fun.” He said “And enjoying walking slowly, being all romantic.” “I thought you didn’t like things being too mushy?” “I don’t. But I can handle mushy, from you only though.” “Thank you.” She said “I love the sand through my feet.” She said, leaning across and kissing Jack’s cheek “Thank you.” She said softly, grinning widely as she approached the water. “You’re welcome.” He said, lifting her up easily and carrying her into the water. “Hey, I can still walk!” She said indignantly. “Barely.” ----- “Belle, wait.” Tony said to Belle, gently holding her arm to stop her “You’re my daughter-in-law, please listen to me. I’m desperate.” Belle looked hesitantly at him, unsure of what she should do “I really don’t think I can Tony. I don’t want to risk Lucas getting upset, I mean he’s my husband. I shouldn’t backstab him.” She said, prising his hand off her arm. “Look, Belle, please. I need my sons back!” He said desperately “Nobody at the house will talk to me, and Beth is considering taking Mattie and moving out.” He revealed the truth. “That’s not my problem.” She said, knowing just how desperate Tony was “I’m sorry but I have no intention of betraying my husband.” “Leave her alone.” Amanda said coldly, hurrying to Belle’s side “She’s told you she doesn’t want to hear what you have to say, now leave her the hell alone. Stay the hell away from my daughter.” She said, glaring at him. “Amanda, you don’t understand.” He stammered slightly, knowing that nobody liked to be on Amanda Vale’s bad side. “I understand perfectly. You’re trying to use my daughter to get your sons back. But if Belle doesn’t want that to happen, then it is her choice, not yours. Now leave her alone, and get back to your little home, hopefully where you’ll be alone. Because I can’t believe you chose anybody else over your sons. I think they are better off with their mother, now remember to stay the hell away from Belle.” She said coldly, glancing sideways at Belle “Come on Belle, I need to speak to you.” ----- “If he gives you anymore pressure, just tell me alright darling?” Amanda told Belle as they walked to her car, her Ferrari. “I will, thanks for that. I don’t really like standing up to my father-in-law.” She admitted. “It’s alright, I understand. I had trouble standing up to my father-in-law.” She shrugged. “Dan’s dad?” Belle asked. “Yes. And you’re father’s father, as well. After we married, four years after you were born, then divorced two years later. I still can’t believe I missed 16 years of your life.” “You’re not missing anymore.” Belle assured her. “I hope not. Speaking of which, you’re father rang this morning. He’s coming to the Bay.” NEXT UPDATE: Who is Belle’s father?
Adia Posted March 4, 2007 Report Posted March 4, 2007 Who is Belle's father! The question that I have been dyng to get answered! You wrote all the dialogue really well. It was so great. Jack and Martha were so cute, it's just the way that he cares about her. “Divorce me and I kill you.” He said seriously. “Do I detect sarcasm there?” She asked hopefully. “No.” That was so funny. Update soon pretty please!!!
Tasha Posted March 4, 2007 Report Posted March 4, 2007 Ooooo...Belle's daddy is coming to town Haha Santa Clause Ignore me. Jacky and Martha are cutesy. I was hoping for Martha loosing balance and falling on top of Jack, and i dont know they share a cute kiss on the sand, but oh wellz. Great chapter More please
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