-ParaisGal- Posted December 24, 2006 Report Posted December 24, 2006 Guys there shant be an update for around, err, three weeks. Holidays, but when I come back there will be many updates. I promise.
gawguss_tiff Posted December 24, 2006 Report Posted December 24, 2006 aww no chapters for 3 weeks and no talkin to you aw lol well i hope you have a lovely holiday huni lol and i shall talk to you when you get back with your updates lol well great chapter damn it beth better believe tony lol xoxo <3 Tiff
-ParaisGal- Posted January 16, 2007 Report Posted January 16, 2007 Chapter Eight Martha looked warily at her mother-in-law. She’d barely even met her and she was making an impression on both her and Belle. A bad impression. “I guess you’re all waiting to hear.” Beth said with a shrug “Kate doesn’t know what I’m going to say, and neither do any of you.” Beth looked around. Tony looked at Beth, hoping it was a good thing. “What I have to say, is I don’t understand how Tony could have married such a manipulative cow.” She said calmly, looking at Kate coldly. Kate’s eyes narrowed dangerously “How dare you.” She said furiously “I’m not manipulative. I’m not a fool.” “I have a hard time believing that.” Beth said, amazingly calm. “Well at least I’m not a fool.” She scoffed “At least I didn’t marry Jack Hunter. That was a classic bad move Beth. And you’re children suffered, obviously. Robbie and Matilda with their self confidence, Kit with her drinking. Wow. You really made a great choice.” She said sarcastically. Beth continued to glare at her, now the pain slowly starting to creep in. What had she done, she knew that Jack hadn’t been the best choice but she’d thought love would be enough. “She’s a better mother to us than you ever were.” Jack said angrily, stepping in between Beth and Kate. “Only because your father ripped you out of my arms Jack. You and Lucas were taken from your mother, by your foolish father.” She said. “He did the best thing he could. He rescued us from an incapable mother who was a foolish little brat. Why don’t you disappear, Kate, none of us want anything to do with you.” Lucas chipped in. “Get off my property.” Beth said, pointing towards the door. “Not without my sons!” She said forcefully. “They want nothing to do with you Kate, get that through your abnormally thick head!” Tony said angrily to her. Ruby walked over to Jack, who reached down to pick her up. “It’s alright sweetie.” Jack said softly to Ruby. “I want to know my granddaughter as well Tony. I have a right.” She said, smirking. “You’ll never know any of your grandchildren.” Jack said, holding Ruby away from Kate. “Please Jack.” She said, almost pleading “I made a mistake, sure a bad mistake but haven’t you ever made a mistake?” She asked, pleading with him openly now “All I want is one more chance. Please.” She pleaded. “No.” He said firmly. ---------------------------- “What’s up?” Corey asked Jack the next day. “You don’t wanna know.” Jack said warily. “Maybe I do, so hurry up and tell me.” Corey said, facing him. “My mother’s turned up in down, doing what she always does. Demanding. She’s demanding from me and my brother, Lucas. She’s demanding to be able to see Ruby as well, something I really don’t appreciate.” He said with a sigh. “Gee, sounds harsh.” Corey sympathised “I haven’t had any of those troubles.” “They’ll come.” Jack said with a shrug “Unless Kara has great parents, and so do you.” “How do you get along with Martha’s parents?” He asked, curious. “Her mother lives in America. Her dad lives who knows where.” He said with a sigh. ---------------------------------------- “Come on sweetie.” Martha called to Ruby “Time to go home. Daddy’ll be waiting for us.” She informed her. “Daddy come play?” She asked, her little face lighting up. “Sweetie daddy has to get home from work.” She said, picking her up, it was a bit harder these days, with her bump. “Martha.” A voice called, heading her way. She turned, expecting it to be Beth or Belle but it was neither “Go away Kate.” She snapped, heading out of the park. “Just because me and my ex are at war doesn’t mean we have to be.” She said calmly “I do want to be a part of my granddaughters life.” She continued. “You won’t be.” She said firmly, staying away from Kate. “Martha please.” “The woman Ruby knows as her grandmother is Beth Holden. That is the way I intend it on staying. I want nothing to do with you, and neither does Ruby.” “Ruby is a little girl who does not understand the complications. She’s what, four?” “So what if she’s four, I’m not letting you near her.” She said firmly, opening her ute and putting Ruby in her baby seat. “You’re being unreasonable. Please.” Kate said, irritation creeping into her voice. The only answer Kate got was the dirt from Martha’s tires. PLEASE RATE AND REVIEW!
katie343 Posted January 16, 2007 Report Posted January 16, 2007 Whoo go Martha! Kate is evil. Can't wait for more
gawguss_tiff Posted January 16, 2007 Report Posted January 16, 2007 “They want nothing to do with you Kate, get that through your abnormally thick head!” Tony said angrily to her. That was hilarious lol Great writting Paris lol .... Stupid Kate why doesnt she just go fall in a hole... no one likes her lol ... ok maybe to far but at least stranded somewhere away from all of them.... No Jack and Martha scenes o well the greatness of the rest made up for it... ooo Paris your on a streak any chance of all the others being updated to?.... lol xoxox <3 Tiff
xsianx Posted January 16, 2007 Report Posted January 16, 2007 Corey!!! Why can't I be his girlfriend?!?! Good on Martha and Beth! **Girl power** Welcome back!
baby gurl Posted January 16, 2007 Report Posted January 16, 2007 ^^^^ lmao!!! haha....your back! great update paris!! loved the fight between kate and beth...update soon....xx
jackandmarthaforever!! Posted January 16, 2007 Report Posted January 16, 2007 AHH!! Great Fic I love it!! Am i the only person who feels sorry for Kate? I think she deserves a second chance. Brilliant writing!! Update soon although i already know that you are very constant with your updates!!
>>Emma<< Posted January 16, 2007 Report Posted January 16, 2007 Paris you're back! Sooo happy I really missed all of your fics! That was such a great chapter, I think Kate should just leave, leave everyone behind - especiallly Jack, Martha, Ruby and their little baby that is on the way Please, please update soon. I am so glad that this fic is back!
Sarah_Lewis Posted January 16, 2007 Report Posted January 16, 2007 That was good =p update soon please
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