Lady In Red

[Eli]

I loved this chapter too!

I had tears in my eyes, it was really beautifully written!

That night dragged longer than any other night. Flynn was laid in bed. He looked so fragile beneath the blanket, I feared touching him incase he broke and I'd be the one responsible for taking him away. I sat myself gently on the bed and gripped his hand. He just looked at me and smiled. We said nothing. Only silence filled the room, but it was a beautiful silence.

The first paragraph was the best IMO, it was really well written!

Can't wait for the next update

[xsianx]

Amy that was beautiful! I had tears in my eyes. I miss Flynn

It's shame there aren't many Flynn fics around.

I love your writing in this because the description is so good you don't need any dialog.

[Adia]

This is a really great fic. It's so sad, but I love how you've written Sally's emotions and perspective, and you've described everything so perfectly.

I feared touching him incase he broke and I'd be the one responsible for taking him away.

That was a really great line and made me teary. Please update again soon!