>>Emma<< Posted January 18, 2007 Report Posted January 18, 2007 2 Chapters!!! They are both great, you better let Lin get found, poor Martha, poor Jack, poor Jay, poor everyone! I feel so sorry for all of them. Please update soon, great chapters
-ParaisGal- Posted January 19, 2007 Report Posted January 19, 2007 Chapter Fourteen: “How do you know?” Martha asked her, running to her ute she bought after she totalled her Datsun ute, a Holden Rodeo. “I read about it, and I spotted that woman with a child who looked exactly like yours. So I figured she’d have to be yours. Contacted the address and here I am.” She replied, heading towards her car. “Alright.” She agreed “I just want my daughter back.” “She’s in Brisbane.” ---------------- Two hours later Peter was standing outside a house. He was sort of in a hiding spot. He was hoping he’d see Lin come running out, chasing something or playing a game. He could only hope though. He saw a tiny little cottage type house, and no car or anything. He heard voices inside. He crept toward the window, being careful to stay quiet. Inside he saw exactly what he wanted to see: A blonde haired girl with a small child. That child was his partner’s daughter, he knew that. She had Lin’s dark hair, and was even wearing the outfit Lin wore after she got taken. He smiled to himself as he headed inside quickly, he had the child in his arms before Tasha even knew what was happening. ---------------- “No sign.” Jack said with a sigh. “I told you we should have left sooner.” Martha snapped at him. “Alright well maybe we should have but there was a high chance she’d come back.” He replied warily. Jack’s phone started buzzing in his pocket and he picked it up. He listened “Peter’s in the house the woman said. He’s found her, the woman was right. He’s got Lin.” He said, already hurrying out of the hospital. “Where is she?” Martha asked him. Jack got in the driver’s seat, and nearly sped off before Martha got in the car, which earned him a glare from her. He drove quickly out of the hospital, nearly hitting the gutter with his enthusiasm to turn. “Jack slow down!” Martha growled at him, gripping the door handle at the gutter “It’s not going to do them any good if we half kill ourselves!” She snapped. Jack slowed down, now going the speed limit. He spotted her about fifteen minutes later and threw on the brakes, earning another grumble and growl from Martha, as he threw open the door and ran to Peter. “Jack she’s here!” She whispered, running to Lin. Jack took them both into his arms. Peter stood back a bit, smiling at the happy couple. He knew Jay would be relieved to see his sister, as would the rest of Summer Bay “Sorry to interrupt but I’m pretty sure you’ll want to get her home.” He said softly, heading to the driver’s seat where the car was still running. “Alright.” Martha agreed, prising Jack’s arms off the pair of them so they could get in the car. --------------------- “Everyone’s going to be thrilled to have her back.” Martha said happily, bouncing her daughter on her knees. “Yeah they are. She’s a beautiful little girl.” Jack said with a grin “I can’t believe we nearly lost her.” “I don’t want to even think about that Jack.” Martha said, frowning at him. She grinned at the welcome sign “You’re home baby girl.” She whispered to her lovingly as she smiled at her. ----------------------- “Oh my god!” Tony gasped, rushing towards them and pulling Lin into his arms, leaving Beth to follow with Jay. He, like her parents had, clutched Lin to him, kissing the top of her head “I’m glad she’s alright.” He said, his eyes brimming with tears, like the rest of the people inside, except the tough ones. “I know. I felt the same.” Jack said, smiling at his daughter, who was clinging to whoever held her. Martha was itching to hold one of her kids, so she picked up Jay from where he’d been gently placed on the ground by Beth, holding him close as well. She kissed his forehead, she never wanted to let either of her kids go. Never again. ----------------------- “Tasha has been charged with kidnapping. But all that’s going to happen is she’s going to be fined.” Peter said with a sigh “That’s all I can put her on.” “Great. So she could take them again?” Martha said angrily. “There is an A.V.O. protecting all of you from her.” He assured her. NEXT CHAPTER: Will the A.V.O. be enough? PLEASE RATE AND REVIEW!
xsianx Posted January 19, 2007 Report Posted January 19, 2007 Tasha is evil I tell you! I can't believe she only got an A.V.O!
beckyboo Posted January 19, 2007 Report Posted January 19, 2007 AWWWWWW They got their little girl back Update ASAP
caitrules Posted January 19, 2007 Report Posted January 19, 2007 Fined? thats all she got!? I want to rip her ratty blonde hair out, throw her in Jail and melt down the key At least Lin is ok
gawguss_tiff Posted January 20, 2007 Report Posted January 20, 2007 This was the one i missed lol i knew i'd missed one lol ARGH!!!!! how is all she gettin a fine!! damn her and her raggy blonde hair lol well yay lins back excellent lol for some reason i dont know why but i find jay extremely cute lmao even though he hasnt had much to do with the last few chapters llol well update ASAP lol xoxo
Tasha Posted January 20, 2007 Report Posted January 20, 2007 no tasha is not gonna go no where near baby Holdens. Great chapter. Im glad Lin is alright MOre please
baby gurl Posted January 20, 2007 Report Posted January 20, 2007 an AVO???!! is that all she gets for kidnapping????????? i thought that she would go to jail!! glad lins ok....update soon....xx
>>Emma<< Posted January 21, 2007 Report Posted January 21, 2007 Great chapter Paris. Glad Lin is ok. More soon please
gawguss_tiff Posted January 24, 2007 Report Posted January 24, 2007 Ok so this is a message from Miss Paris she is going away until Tuesday which is the day after her birthday so everyone has to say happy birthday when she gets back lol so there wont be any updates until then or after
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