Where Do You Go...? (by Eli) - comments

[Eli]

Thank you! I think I will post the last chapter tonight or tomorrow

[Eli]

No comments at all? I hope it wasn't that bad

[Skykat]

I didn't even realise you'd update Eli sorry.

Not bad at all, beautiful! Haunting, sad and a lovely ending. This was really well written, beautiful.

[Eli]

Thank you

Phew, I know it's a bit whiny to ask people to comment, but I just got really nervous and started wondering if it was a complete disaster because no one commented when I have gotten comments very fast on the previous chapters

[Skykat]

I just don't think people have been about I know both Jess and ILM are only popping on and off here at the moment because they're so busy. I know what you mean though.

Are you okay with me moving this to the library now its completed? I'll leave you a link in here.

[Eli]

Sure

[Skykat]

Topic moved, thanks. I'm having a mad tidy up of the fic forum today and moving everything!

Edited December 21, 2006 by Skykat

[Eli]

Okay, thanks And thanks for moving it for me!

[I love music]

Really well written, Eli, and sooo sad. I'm afraid I would've had a happy ending (Dani comes at the last moment to rescue her and says something corny like "Jade, we grew up together and home is where the heart is..." ) but that's just me, I always have to have happy endings!

Great fic!

[Eli]

Thanks

I kind of tried to leave the ending a bit open (I didn't write that Jade died till example) so the reader could imagine. Did she just just in to the water to swim after the light? Did she die? Was she rescued? I don't know.

I'm glad you liked it

And by the way: you don't say "till example" do you? I have been wondering for such a long time, because it sounds so wrong and "Norwegianized" in my head.