Where Do You Go...? (by Eli) - comments

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Thanks

I kind of tried to leave the ending a bit open (I didn't write that Jade died till example) so the reader could imagine. Did she just just in to the water to swim after the light? Did she die? Was she rescued? I don't know.

I'm glad you liked it

And by the way: you don't say "till example" do you? I have been wondering for such a long time, because it sounds so wrong and "Norwegianized" in my head.

Oh, she was rescued in my version.

And by the way: you don't say "till example" do you?

No, it's "for example". But your English is great anyway!

[Eli]

Oh, she was rescued in my version.

And by the way: you don't say "till example" do you?

No, it's "for example". But your English is great anyway!

Thanks

At the moment it's not good at all, because I don't have spelling and grammar control on my computer, and I have my dictionary in my locker at school...

I used "for example" for a while, but I thought it sounded even more weird, and "Norwegianized".