Second Best

[-ParaisGal-]

Very well written, can't say much about the content. You know why.

[gawguss_tiff]

aww dnt be like that paris lol

[Tasha]

i hate you i hate you i hate you

[gawguss_tiff]

you so dont hate me lol

[caitrules]

I also hate you, how could you do that to us? I'm speechless with hate right now for you and Sam

[foxychic99]

well, i dont hate you miss tiffy but i certainly do not like you right now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! how could you do that to them. and make that ugly rat pregnant, fix it tiffy NOW! lol well i personally think martha is pregnant and thats why shes been having that sore stomach that you casually tried to put in there yea that rite nuffin gets pass me lol... at least i think thats what is happening lol but if it doesnt i will completely deny this post, well this has been my longest post EVER so im going to stop now! cant wait for the update chicka

[bay girl]

I'm guessing that Martha may be preggers aswell.

Go away Sam. I don't want Jack to be the father. Hopefully Sam was seeing other blokes too, and one of them is the dad.

[captain_jack_sparrow]

wow thats great writing well done

[>>Emma<<]

No comment on the content.

Well written.

[baby gurl]

in answer to your question they are NOT better apart so dont you dare write that for the next chapter!! just a little friendly tip...tiffy come on msn!!! xx update soon btw reli gd chapter.