~Amy~ Posted February 24, 2007 Report Posted February 24, 2007 I flashbacks. No rhyme nor reason to it; I just do. I know its weird but Luke & Mac could actually be cute. Perfect writing there Laura!
loobieloo Posted February 24, 2007 Report Posted February 24, 2007 Thankies Amy, Im suprised no one wants to kill me yet hehe.
linzie_mac01 Posted February 24, 2007 Report Posted February 24, 2007 OMG that was amazing, loving the flashbacks! I kept telling myself the whole time that Martha wouldn't ever do the dirty with Lucus but there was no denying it when i saw the flashback later on (what am i on about...seeing the flashbacks! , oh dear, it all felt so real ) Lets hope Jack stays calm, but i'm not sure i'm liking him!
~Amy~ Posted February 24, 2007 Report Posted February 24, 2007 Thankies Amy, Im suprised no one wants to kill me yet hehe. emphasis on the word "Yet".
Zetti Posted February 24, 2007 Report Posted February 24, 2007 I am not gonna kill you I want Ash in it!
vale4eva Posted February 24, 2007 Report Posted February 24, 2007 That was great Laura! But is it just me or have you turned Jack into a beater-upper! Nooooooooooooooooo! Jack would never hurt Martha! ..... Would he!? I wonder what hes done to her! Lukas and Martha- hmm, interesting pairing. I think luke would really look after Martha, maybe theyd make a good couple! (but not as good as JnM) Excellent writing, i hope Jack doesnt hurt Martha, although i do disagree with her doing the dirty on Jacky. Honesty is the best policy Well, most of the time it is! looking forward to the next one And Rachel had to land Martha in it didnt she! Nice going Rach
loobieloo Posted February 24, 2007 Report Posted February 24, 2007 Thanks for the comments. linzie_mac, I cant believe you thought it was that good. Thats made me soo happy now. Amy, yes the word "yet" was there for a reason haha. People will want to kill me in the next chapter, so im just enjoying life while it lasts. Zetti, I love Ash! , and you seriously can't expect me to have a fic without Ash in it so just wait and see . Rachel, (that is your name isnt it? i think it is , im sure it said in your sig, but i cant see that while im replying lol) Jack is a beater-upper, but its not that bad. I like to be origional lol and no one else has written about him like that hehe. Lucas and Martha are a great couple, just think how cute it would be! And yeah, Rachel is just not good new in this fic haha. Lol that was a long post hehe. I like to reply to what people have put though . And thanks for all of your comments.
jackandmarthaforever!! Posted February 24, 2007 Report Posted February 24, 2007 It is indeed a very original fic loobieloo!! I just read that the age differencew is smaller between Martha and Luc than Martha and Jack. I can't believe that!!
Zetti Posted February 24, 2007 Report Posted February 24, 2007 good Ash! I am gonna put him in mine now summer bay in the future
loobieloo Posted February 24, 2007 Report Posted February 24, 2007 It is indeed a very original fic loobieloo!! I just read that the age differencew is smaller between Martha and Luc than Martha and Jack. I can't believe that!! you can call me Laura, since that my name:) And yes, it is true They are of closer ages.
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