puja Posted January 31, 2007 Report Posted January 31, 2007 Lil Sis! Just a mental note; my brother is kicking me off the computer so I only managed to read chapter 6 (which was fab by the way!) I will resume when I'm on next!
Nicom Posted February 1, 2007 Report Posted February 1, 2007 Awww J&M so cute! Ollie is still annoying me though. Stupid boy and his stupid juice.. I should be nicer to children. I've got the sneezes, I've sneezed four five times whilst writing this comment. And I need to sneeze again... I'll hold it in. Anyway, enough about my sneezes. Update soon!
>>Emma<< Posted February 4, 2007 Report Posted February 4, 2007 1)I hope this is the next chapter that I have posted, if not somebody please tell me and I will just post chapter 11! 2)Apologise if this chapter is rubbish, hasn't been proof read or anything! 3)Sorry it has taken me so long to update, have been busy with school, but its not really a good excuse, I could have found 5 mins to cut and paste. So I apologise, the next time I update will be within the next 3 days Chapter 10 So far Martha hadn’t been impressed by her sisters plans. Sure she enjoyed spending time with Jack, she still loved him, but she was not planning on letting him anywhere near her anytime soon. They were down on the beach, as the sun was shinning Jack thought that it would be a good place to go. He had made a picnic as well, much to Ollie’s approval. “Daddy will you come in the water with me?” Ollie asked “Only if Mummy comes as well” Jack replied “Pleeeeeeeease” Ollie said “Fine, even if it is only to stop your whining!” Martha exclaimed. “Yay, come on” Ollie started running off down the beach. “Come on Martha, its going to be fun, you me, water, messing around” Jack smirked. “I think you’re forgetting our child, Ollie, you know he wanted to go down to the water in the first place” Martha said before running off to Ollie. Jack did not look happy. --- Martha had decided that she wasn’t feeling to good, so she was going to go home. Jack had decided that he just had to spend every second with her so he was coming as well much to Martha’s annoyance. She was trying to get away from him, as she was once again finding it hard to not get back with him. She also wanted time to think, she wanted to think about the baby and whether or not it would be good to get back with Jack. The obvious answer was yes, her heart was telling her yes, but her head no. “Here’s some water” Jack gave Martha a glass. “Why are you so good to me Jack?” Martha asked, hopefully this would help her decision. “Because I love you, no other reason” Jack smiled. “No other questions, you may no leave” Martha joked. “Only joking, come and sit with me” Martha knew what she was doing was wrong, she was giving him what she wanted. “You know Jack, I’ve been thinking about us a lot. My heart is telling me that I love you and should get back with you, but then my head is telling me that I can’t let you in, not yet, I don’t trust you enough” “I say you take me back” Jack replied “Jack, I’m being serious, it’s not just me that’s going to get hurt if it all goes wrong, it’s Ollie as well and the unborn baby will be effected. If I get back together with you then you have to be totally serious about it as well.” “Martha I am serious about you, I love you to pieces, you and Ollie mean the world to me” Jack smiled. “This little chat has helped me a lot, now I think I’m going to go and lie down. I still don’t feel too good” “Ok, I’ll come and wake you up when I cook something later” Jack went off into the kitchen. “That really helped your decision didn’t it Martha” she said sarcastically to herself. --- 2 Months later Martha had decided that she did want to get back with Jack, she just hadn’t told him. She hadn’t found the right moment. Jack had been great over the past few months as Martha had had pretty bad morning sickness, but it was finally starting to go away. Today was her first ultrasound. “Martha are you ready to go?” Jack asked “Yeah, lets go” Martha followed Jack outside. Ollie was with Becky, she had agreed to look after him for the afternoon. At the hospital “Right let’s take a look at your baby” Rachel smiled. “So do you want it to be a boy or a girl?” She then asked “A girl” Martha answered whilst Rachel placed the gel on her stomach. “Ok let’s see” Rachel stared at the screen. “I just need a second opinion on this, I’ll be back in a minute.” Rachel walked off to find another doctor. “Jack what’s wrong?” Martha asked worried “Nothing, she just wants to check that our baby is alright. It’s going to be fine I promise” Jack smiled “Ok, this is Dr Young, he’s just going to take a quick look at your baby” Rachel said. Preview Is the baby alright? Please comment Edit: Just seen how short this chapter is, so apologise for that aswell
vale4eva Posted February 4, 2007 Report Posted February 4, 2007 Great chapter! why doesnt martha just tell jack she wants him back then they can be a happy family again! As for the baby scan.....im thinking, maybe shes having twins!? but is this her first scan or second? cuz if its her first scan then maybe she IS having twins, she just didnt realise. unless something really is wrong with the baby! oh heck i dont know! lol update soon please
>>Emma<< Posted February 4, 2007 Report Posted February 4, 2007 Thanks for your comment... ...As for Martha having twins, I've already written the next chapter, so it was decided as to whether I was in a happy mood or not!
linzie_mac01 Posted February 4, 2007 Report Posted February 4, 2007 Great post! Please don't let there be anything wrong with the unborn baby, i'll be really sad and why can't Martha just tell Jack how she feels and tell him to take things slow is she stills feels unsure of his trust? Its so frustrating
Adia Posted February 4, 2007 Report Posted February 4, 2007 “Why are you so good to me Jack?” Martha asked, hopefully this would help her decision. “Because I love you, no other reason” Jack smiled. That was the cuteness! OMg what is wrong with the baby Emma! It can't be anything bad... it has to be something good...like twins (hint hint). Nopressure or anything... But seriously, great chapter and your writing is awesome! update soon!
HeavenForbid Posted February 4, 2007 Report Posted February 4, 2007 I have just started to reading this and I have to say that it ia excellent! I really hope everything is okay with the baby.
gawguss_tiff Posted February 4, 2007 Report Posted February 4, 2007 EMMA!!! if you make anything happen to that baby i will kick you soo hard missy we have had this conversation on msn lol well excellent chapter huni update ASAP xoxox
Tasha Posted February 4, 2007 Report Posted February 4, 2007 Emmmmma...she better be having twins. I like twins Cute chapter though. I hope they do get back together More please
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