linzie_mac01 Posted February 23, 2007 Report Posted February 23, 2007 OMG thats awful news, i can't believe he just won't wake up! And where the hell is Tony and Lucus, come on guys, Jack needs you lot there! A good chapter, even if it was depressing!
vale4eva Posted February 23, 2007 Report Posted February 23, 2007 You cant kill Jack! Thats just not fair! JnM are like fish and chips (or any other food that comes in pairs ), you can eat them separatly but its alot less satisfying, together there just perfect! I dont understand how Jack can just fall into a coma.... maybe he had some bad chicken!? I guess we'l find out in the next chapter. I would say im looking forward to it but im slightly concerned that your going to kill Jack off, if that happens il be very upset! And im sure you dont want to upset your readers now do you!
>>Emma<< Posted February 23, 2007 Report Posted February 23, 2007 LOL! Well I've nearly written the next chapter...and if you're all lucky I'll post it tonight
xsianx Posted February 23, 2007 Report Posted February 23, 2007 Kill Jack I still don't trust him, so he must go
baby gurl Posted February 23, 2007 Report Posted February 23, 2007 Well me and Emma were talking on msn and I asked her if Jack was going to die and she said yes!! But I don't think that she could really becuase then it wouldn't be J/M fic any more and then everyone who talks to her on msn won't be happy with her (especially me) xx
>>Emma<< Posted February 24, 2007 Report Posted February 24, 2007 Aren't you all lucky souls, another update! But now I am officially sick of microsoft word! I hope you all enjoy this chapter. I haven't killed Jack yet Chapter 13 Martha sat in the same position with her head in her hands. She had figured out that taking the traffic into account Tony should be here in one minute. One minute was too long for her to be alone anymore. She thought back to last night, Jack had gone to so much trouble; he had even got her favourite bottle of wine, not that she could drink it. He seemed to forget that she was pregnant. Things like that made Martha laugh. Before Martha could carry on reminiscing, Tony came rushing in. She checked the clock before greeting him. Right on time. She ran up to him and gave him a hug. He was as good as her dad. They seemed to stay in the embrace forever, it reassured them both that there was hope, and Jack would be alright. When they finally broke apart and sat down, they didn’t speak. Both of them felt like there were no words to be said. They felt the same, so how was talking about it going to help? “How was Ollie?” Martha broke the silence. “He was fine, he doesn’t really understand what is happening. I did think about bringing him down here, but it’s not the right place for him to be” Tony replied. “Yeah…” Martha’s voice trailed off as the silence came back. They sat like that for another 5 minutes, not a word said; only the occasional sigh could be heard. Finally Dr. Young came out and spoke to them… “Mrs Holden” He started. “It seems your husband has poisoning, alcohol poisoning to be exact. Did you go out to any bars last night?” Dr Young asked. “No, no I’m pregnant, Jack wouldn’t take me out to a club, we had dinner in our house. Only Jack drank some wine. I think I still have the bottle at home” Martha said thinking hard as to how this could have happened. “Do you mind bringing it in, it could really help us establish how Jack got alcohol poisoning” Dr Young replied. “No of course not. I’ll go and get it right now. Tony call me if anything happens” Martha started to run out of the hospital. Anything to help Jack get better. --- Martha got back to the hospital as quick as she could, she would have looked a bit weird carrying around a nearly empty bottle of wine. Martha hadn’t realised how much he had actually drunk. She handed the bottle to Dr Young, before heading into Jack’s room. He seemed so lifeless just lying there attached to all of these machines. It wasn’t the Jack she knew at all. Usually by now, they would be on a break in the Diner, having fun together, but instead she was sitting by his uncomfortable bed, watching the machines keep him alive. “Jack, I need you to wake up for me” Martha said softly a single tear rolling down her cheek. Tony then walked in, he had obviously just been to get something to drink by the coffee that was in his hand. “Come on love, he will be fine, he’s a fighter” Tony tried to reassure her. “And by the way, congratulations on the baby, I heard you tell Dr Young earlier. How far along are you?” Tony asked eager to find out everything I could. “Not very, I’ve had my first scan. I have the picture at home. I want Jack to be here when the baby is born. What if he doesn’t make it Tony?” Martha’s tears started again. “He will make it. He will.” --- “Martha we’ve found out that the wine that Jack had last night was spiked. We don’t know how, we’ll have to wait until Jack wakes up before we can try and find out where the wine came from. I’m sorry but now, it’s just a waiting game.” Dr Young left the room. “Who would want to do this to Jack?” Martha asked in shock. But Tony could give no answer. He just like Martha wanted Jack back so much. He wanted to be with Jack, but he felt he couldn’t. He was about to break down, and if Jack woke up then he wouldn’t want him to see him upset. “I’m just going to get some fresh air” Tony quickly exited the room. “Jack it’s just you and me again” Martha pulled a chair up. “Just like how we used to be, when Ollie wasn’t born, well I need you to wake up for me, for Ollie. He needs you Jack, so please wake up for him. I love you so much, I need you awake, talking to me, I just need to hear your voice. Please Jack, never leave me again” Martha started to cry. “Mummy, what’s the matter” Ollie rushed up to her and gave her a hug. Beth had brought him home from nursery. She thought that it would be best if he was with Martha. “Mummy’s just a bit upset at the moment about Daddy. But it’s nothing for you to worry about, everything is going to be fine” Martha pulled him into her lap. “What’s the matter with Daddy?” Ollie asked “He’s been asleep for a very long time, and won’t wake up. So Julie, and Rachel are trying to get him to wake up.” Martha tried to explain. “If I jump on the bed he will wake up. That’s what I usually do” “It won’t work this time baby, not this time. You just need to sit here with Mummy and talk to him. Ask him to wake up for you. He might wake up for you; he might wake up for Grandpa even. We just don’t know.” Martha ran her hands through his hair and stroked his cheek. This could be all she had left. --- One Day Later Jack still hadn’t woken up, much to Martha’s despair. She hadn’t left him once apart from that morning when she went home to see Ollie. “Martha!” Martha recognised the voice straight away, but she was yet to decide whether or not it was a good thing she was here. “What are you doing here?” Martha asked her. “I came as soon as I heard about Jack. I thought you might need me here, and to look after Ollie aswell. Where is he anyway?” She asked “Beth is looking after him. Look I know it’s nice you’ve come down here, but do you have an ulterior motive or something, because you hate Jack, so why would you care if he was ok?” Martha asked “I can’t believe you think that I would just come here to get some gossip or something. Believe it or not, but I actually care about you, and I want you to be happy. If Jack makes you happy, then I want him to get better, I don’t like seeing you upset at all. “I’m just saying if you want something in return for staying here, then you can get lost because I don’t want you hanging around here like that. So are you staying or going?” Martha asked. Preview Who is the woman? Jack dies Does Jack's condition change at all? Please please comment
beckyboo Posted February 24, 2007 Report Posted February 24, 2007 We are lucky were! Jack will not die he will be fine Update soon Now ] I think it could be Marthas sister or maybe it her mum Or maybe its Marthas sister Me update soon Em xxxxx
Tasha Posted February 24, 2007 Report Posted February 24, 2007 Yeh, doesnt Martha have a sister that doesnt like Jack?? or am i just imagining things And Emma you promised be Jack wouldnt die, or did you, i cant remember And 2 chapters in 1 day, you must really love us Great 2 chappies though. Please wake Jacky up. Ollie is soooo cute <3 and poor Martha More please
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