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OMG

That Becca is soooooooooo lucky :wub: :wub:

Poor Nic.

I love it Shan, I really do :D

Becca :wub: Nic

*edit* Shan don't dare blame us!!!!

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awww...Niccy is alright. Glad he didnt get hurt. Great chapt, and Paulie and JOdi were in it :D And Holly better shut Bobby down, coz she's gorgeous with her hubby, and Bobby aint allowed to break them up. Great cahpt

More please :)

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Great update Shan. :)

Lol, so the intentions to kill Peter were there! :P Can't believe Bobby likes Holly and Holly doesn't even seem to realise :P.

DB Nice was he ill that day? :o

And where's Ada and Dan with their bets? :P

Update soon.

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Edit: I was going to kill Nic off by making him drown in a toilet (long story) but I didn't want Drew to be killed off in HS :(

I liked the idea of drowning in the toilet. :P Heeheee... You know why...

Right, now back to the topic:

Bobby really has a fixation on Holly. Can't believe she hasn't clued in that it's her. Maybe she thinks it's Jodi. :P

Poor Becca having to walk in the rain. She definitely isn't having a good day, isn't she? Loved how she went on and on about Claire. Can't blame Claire considering that Nic's MIA.... But lucky Becca coz she gets Nic Bishop as a personal escort home. :D

My favourite scenes:

“I heard that!” Daniel shouted out, making them both fall silent.
Lol, don't you just love my alter ego? He's such a funny chap...

“Becca?” she heard a male say softly as he walked up behind her.

“Go away you pervert!” she panicked as she turned around and kicked them where it hurts.

“Ow! Bloody hell, Becca!” Nic cried out in pain as he fell to the ground.

“Oh, sorry! What are you doing? Claire is going nuts at home!”

That scene was hillarious and it was written brilliantly.

Overall, it was an awesome chapter. Loved it.

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