Sam =) Posted April 8, 2007 Report Posted April 8, 2007 Aww I loved it thanks for the update Loved it can't wait for the next chapter. Quote
>>Emma<< Posted April 8, 2007 Report Posted April 8, 2007 That chapter was fab Shan. Aww that scene between Jon and Paul was so cute, Paul's gonna be a great father. Aww I wonder if it's going to be a boy or a girl...and names! I wonder what they'll choose Can't wait for the next bit Quote
Traceve Posted April 10, 2007 Report Posted April 10, 2007 (edited) Thanks you 8! *doesn't know what to say* Lil! Becca and her naughty dream *shakes head* Ha,I almost fell for that!I don't blame her for wanting to go to bed early either,lol. Haha, I would totally go to bed early too! Edited April 10, 2007 by Traceve Quote
swfc Posted April 10, 2007 Report Posted April 10, 2007 First off, welcome back Shannon. Since things have settled down at home and my proofie isn't being slack lately, Lol, where did you hire your proof reader anyway? Seems like they're forever slacking Anyway, back to topic: Holly's in love with Bobby? How dare she. She turns him down and now she loves him? Geez... Figures... Stick to your man, Holly. Bobby belongs to someone else... *cough*the girl in New York*cough* Aw, we all know Paul's going to be a good daddy. Poor Izzy. Lol, DB, you're such a crack up. Missed him like crazy. And Becca/Nic. I nearly fell off my chair reading that. Lol.... That was a good one Shan. Had us all fooled. I think Lil's still in shock. I loved the desciptive writing for this latest update. Excellently written. Keep the new style. I love it. Update soon. Quote
Sally_Fletcher Posted April 11, 2007 Report Posted April 11, 2007 Great update! Oh, Holly! Lol at Tim and Ada!!! Quote
Tasha Posted April 11, 2007 Report Posted April 11, 2007 GReat chapter. Your writing is really good Shannon, great work. Naughty Holly, poor Paul Tim and Ada, funny muffins. Claire and Nic, cuteness. Poor Averyl More please, *whispers*withpaulandjodi*whispers* Quote
Lilone Posted April 11, 2007 Report Posted April 11, 2007 Hope Avryl comes back... Becca needs her best mate back But she needs someone else more, aye shan Update soon Quote
allibaz91 Posted April 11, 2007 Report Posted April 11, 2007 Fabulous update, Shan! Nic and Claire are cute but I don't think you ever explained what Katrina was doing there, unless I missed something Yay!! Bring Averyl back and Bobby and her can get together and we'll have a Holly vs Averyl bitch-fest Aweomse, hon, more soon! Quote
Traceve Posted April 12, 2007 Report Posted April 12, 2007 but I don't think you ever explained what Katrina was doing there, unless I missed something Thats still coming! Thanks guys/girls Quote
aejdude Posted April 12, 2007 Report Posted April 12, 2007 (edited) Great chapters Shan. In 51, Lol at Becca daydreaming wonder whether they'll ever actually get together? 52 was one funny chapter! First of all DB was funny once again lol, and i think it was quite obvious that it was about Izzy seeing as she had been asked not to turn up lol. Dan was a bit oblivious not realising that if Izzy isn't there then it's bound to be about her. Lol at them both! Yay for Leah actually winning for once lol. Lol at Jason falling asleep on Dan. Wonder whether averyl goes back, and if she does there will be a Holly Averyl Drew love triangle lol. Can't wait for more. Edited April 12, 2007 by aejdude Quote
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