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Better post a comment before Shannon hits me. :P

The Rhys/Becca scene was so sad. I was on the verge of crying. But, the whole scene was written very well. You captured the emotions that the both of them were feeling very well. Love Rhys' dedication to Indi. Him talking to her was sad but also very, very sweet.

Love the fact that Averyl is coming home. Now to see if we get the Holly/Averyl bitch fight that Ali and Aaron want so badly. :P

Katrina/Claire scene was hillarious. It cracked me up entirely. Loved it. I think what I loved most was Katrina accidentally going into Nickerz's room and saw him naked... Lol, that had me in stiches of laughter.

Aw, Mark... He really loves to sing. Altho, he should shut up a little bit before he annoys the living daylights of everyone and DB kicks him out. I would be gutted.

All in all, that was a really excellent chapter, Shannon. You had a mixture of emotions. From sadness to just hillarious. And it was written very well, too.

Loving the teaser. Please, update soon. :D

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Lol bring on the Avril Holly Bobby love triangle. :P

Fantastic chapter Shan. :D I swear the chapters are getting longer and longer which is a good thing :).

I loved the speech Rhys gave to Indi's headstone. Can picture it so well thanks to the wonderful descriptions you give. :)

I think that is a bit of a coincidence that Rhys and Becca are there at the exact same time lol maybe it means they are meant to be together. :P

I think it's good that they have something in common in the way that Becca goes there to see her brother and rhys goes there to see Indi. Poor Rhys and Becca.

Lol at Mark disturbing Ray. I wonder what Dan has to talk to Mark about. His singing perhaps? Lol.

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Great chapter. Yay for the love triangle lol. Can't believe Holly actually asked lol it's like Bobby asking Holly all over again lol.

What can i say? I'm not impressed about Mark :P i mean not replying to any fanmail that isn't good!

Yay for Bobby/Averyl parts. :P I bet Averyl is really happy to be back now, back with Bobby.

No more filming for Jodi and Paul :( that is very sucky.

Can't wait for more.

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Yay there way so me Paul and Jodi in that chapter :D .

I was worried for a minute there would be no Paul and Jodi in the fic.

Well awesome updateas always, can't wait for more.

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A whale of a Martha, i love it :lol: Great chapter. Yay for Bobby and Averyl :) Well, as long as Paul and Jodz are still in the fic, im happy :)

More please :)

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