Come What May

[Adia]

I love the choice of name. It's so cute.

Martha’s groan of pain could be heard from the bed. Jack whirled around, staring at her hopefully and taking her hand gently. A look of pain crossed her face, and Jack stroked her face gently. He smiled in relief when he saw her eyes half open “Hey.” He whispered softly to her.

^ Awwww.... That was just the sweetness. Now all we need is a miraculous recovery for Martha!

[-ParaisGal-]

Miracle recovery...yes...ahem.

Thanks for the comments everyone! Adia, MSN please? If I have your addy, bad memory!

[gawguss_tiff]

awww i love that name its so great and it is a girl awwww lol and its alright yay and so is Martha well shes alright for now i hope she can beat the cancer lol excellent chapter UPDATE ASAP

xoxox

[~Rosey~]

My review:

Awww. 2 amzing chapters.

Poor Martha. I hope shes okay.

Lots of Rachie in that last chapter

I love the name of the new baby.

I love the names you choose for people

Update soon..umm I dont know what to call you any more

[-ParaisGal-]

May post the other chapter tonight. Hopefully I've got two written

[~Rosey~]

Bit ahead of your self there Paris (do you mind me callnig you that?!)

I hope you update soon. I've taken a liking to this fic.

[-ParaisGal-]

I have a question. Should I speed up time to two years, and tell the story of her battle of cancer from two years, and then maybe she'd have another baby (I want her to have three in this fic), and then well, it shall go. Do you want? Maybe in about two chapters, the time would go to two years into the future.

[*J&M*]

Awww Mackenzie Katherine Holden I like that name Great chapter *Parais-Girl*, I think I'd like it if it was 2 years in the future, I don't really mind though, what suits you best. Update Soon.

[-ParaisGal-]

If nobody objects, I'll do it.

[~Rosey~]

I think (just my opinion)

That you should leave it for now and maybe in about 3 more chapters you can speed it up.