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I love the choice of name. It's so cute.

Martha’s groan of pain could be heard from the bed. Jack whirled around, staring at her hopefully and taking her hand gently. A look of pain crossed her face, and Jack stroked her face gently. He smiled in relief when he saw her eyes half open “Hey.” He whispered softly to her.

^ Awwww.... That was just the sweetness. Now all we need is a miraculous recovery for Martha!

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Awww. 2 amzing chapters.

Poor Martha. I hope shes okay.

Lots of Rachie in that last chapter

I love the name of the new baby.

I love the names you choose for people

Update soon..umm I dont know what to call you any more :unsure:

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I have a question. Should I speed up time to two years, and tell the story of her battle of cancer from two years, and then maybe she'd have another baby (I want her to have three in this fic), and then well, it shall go. Do you want? Maybe in about two chapters, the time would go to two years into the future.

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