Sarah_Lewis Posted January 31, 2007 Report Posted January 31, 2007 That was flaming awesome Fuj !! Update soon=p
baby gurl Posted January 31, 2007 Report Posted January 31, 2007 hey guys heres the next part...enjoy. _______ "Well that was fun." Martha spoke sarcasticly. "I know it wouldn't have been easy for you but you have to think positive." "Positive?" Martha scoffed. "How the **** am I suppose to think positive when I could go to f****** jail?" Martha yelled. Jack sighed. He knew Martha wouldn't be happy but he had no idea she would be fuming. "I'm sorry. I didn't mean to take it out on you." She appologised. "Its ok. So are you going to tell the girls?" Jack asked changing the subject a little. "I can't. They won't be able to take it. I just want to take each step as it goes. I'm sorry." "For what?" Jack asked confused. "For ruining tonight. It was so much fun until that phone call." "Don't worry its not your fault. How about you come back to my place and we'll have a drink?" Jack suggested. "Sounds good." Martha agreed. _____________ It was now 10 o'clock and Martha and Jack were both drunk. "Oh god I got to go. I'm not sure if grandad said he would look after the girls all night." Martha said laughing. "I'm sure he realised you wouldn't be back." "Hows that?" Martha asked. "Well. Your with an extremely hot guy. Do I need to say any more?" Jack smirked. "You are so full of your self. I didn't even say you were hot." Martha told him. "You didn't have to I know you like me." Jack laughed. "Me? Like you?" Martha said trying to laugh it off. "I saw you blush when I told you look beautiful. So come on when we were in the resaurant, you didn't think about coming over to my place?" Jack smirked. "Of course not." Martha shrugged. "So you didn't think about kissing me?" Jack asked smiling. "No." Martha told him simply. "So you wouldn't like it if I kissed you." "You got to be kidding. I would hate it." "Really?" Jack asked getting closer until they were only centimeters away. "Rea..." Martha began but stopped when she saw the passion in Jacks eyes. Suddenly her reaction changed. "Kiss me." Jack moved closer as their lips joined together, Martha laying on the sofa. "Lets go to the bedroom" She told him suducing him. _________________________________ Tahts the end of the chapter. As I dont know if Im going to update any more I thought I'd give you a nice chapter. please reply...xx
Sarah_Lewis Posted January 31, 2007 Report Posted January 31, 2007 =o your not going to update anymore =l you have to i love this fic now that i've read it !! cant believe i didnt read it sooner !! Anyways great chaper Fuj !!
>>Emma<< Posted January 31, 2007 Report Posted January 31, 2007 A happy chapter for once You can't stop writing it, you just can't! Martha and Jack don't wait until the second date eh! Please please please update soon! Love this fic!
xsianx Posted January 31, 2007 Report Posted January 31, 2007 Cute chapter! I relly really really really wouldn't like it if he kissed me.... At first for some reason I thought I was reaing LAFS and I was like my gosh he recovered quickly!
Tasha Posted February 1, 2007 Report Posted February 1, 2007 awwww...cute cahpter. Love it More please
gawguss_tiff Posted February 1, 2007 Report Posted February 1, 2007 YAY excellent chapter honey what is it with you and never being on MSN its annoying lol well update ASAP xoxox
baby gurl Posted February 1, 2007 Report Posted February 1, 2007 hey guys update will be up soon...just doing alittle revision then gotta do my hair (straighten) then the update will be up along with me going on msn!! xx
linzie_mac01 Posted February 1, 2007 Report Posted February 1, 2007 Wow!!! Great fic. The last time i looked you had only done the first post LOL and now...about 10pages later i finally catch up! Thanks for a sweet lusty chapter
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