Tasha Posted February 12, 2007 Report Posted February 12, 2007 Then who's the father of the twins?? Martha sure does get around, in a non-mean way, im not calling her a sl*t i swear. And then soon after Gregg's baby is born, she'll have Jack's baby That's just hilarious
baby gurl Posted February 17, 2007 Report Posted February 17, 2007 lmao!!! martha was 'raped?' so thats how she had the twins...and who says that Gregg's baby will survive and that she'll have Jack's baby? You never know Martha may even go to jail!!! next chapter today...xx
>>Emma<< Posted February 17, 2007 Report Posted February 17, 2007 Great chapters Fuj. I can't believe you left it there though. Martha will not go to jail though, I don't think you could be that cruel! Update soon please.
baby gurl Posted February 17, 2007 Report Posted February 17, 2007 ^^ haha thanks emma...but am i going to be nice about it? will i really let them be happy that easily? x
baby gurl Posted February 18, 2007 Report Posted February 18, 2007 hey guys heres the next chapter...thanks madame zetti for proof reading and for laura for offering too. _____ “We find Martha Mackenzie...” Martha took a deep breath. “Not guilty.” “Oh thank God.” Jack thought. Martha smiled as she walked her way over to Jack. “See I told you things will be ok.” He laughed. “Thank you.” Martha told him. “For what?” Jack asked. “For having faith in me. For getting me a good brief. For being there for me and the girls.” “No problem.” He laughed as he gave her a hug. “I love you.” Martha said aloud without even thinking. Jack looked at her both happy and shocked. “Oh God, sorry I know its soon and...” “Ssshh.” Jack said putting his index finger to her lips. They both looked down each other not long before locking their lips. As they stopped for breath Jack spoke; “I love you too.” Martha smiled as she hugged the man that she loved. They hadn't known each other long but they knew it felt right. __________________________________________ As they both walked into Martha's apartment, they both stopped to see the house a mess. The cushions were thrown every where, there was glass smashed, chairs knocked over and even worse the girls were nowhere to be seen. “Oh my God.” Martha screamed. “Where are the girls.” She cried out running into their room. A minute later she ran out crying. “They're gone.” Jack immediately ran over to her and pulled her in for a hug. “Its going to be ok. We'll find them” He reassured them. Five minutes later Martha had calmed down a little and the police were on their way to take a statement. “Martha what's this?” Jack asked as he held up a note. Martha walked up to him and opened the note up. It read; You killed someone who I loved and now its pay back time. You won't ever see them again. As she finished read the note Martha ran out of her apartment leaving Jack stunned. _________ please dont kill me all at once...please comment xx
Zetti Posted February 18, 2007 Report Posted February 18, 2007 fantastic as i already knew! Dont let anything bad happen More please
beckyboo Posted February 18, 2007 Report Posted February 18, 2007 The minute you get on MSN Im going to tell you what a great chapter Update soon hunni Oh and if ya want ill be a proofy! xxxxxx
baby gurl Posted February 18, 2007 Report Posted February 18, 2007 thanks zetti and bekky i'm scared to go msn now!! lol...thanks when i've written the next chapter do you mind proof reading for me please? xx
Zetti Posted February 18, 2007 Report Posted February 18, 2007 cum on msn! becky and me and u are gonna have a serious chat!
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