beckyboo Posted February 18, 2007 Report Posted February 18, 2007 No course i dont mind But get your bum on msn now missy!
-michelle- Posted February 18, 2007 Report Posted February 18, 2007 Brilliant. Cant wait for the next update
>>Emma<< Posted February 18, 2007 Report Posted February 18, 2007 Great chapter Fuj. I'm sure they'll be found I'm glad she's not guilty. Update soon.
vale4eva Posted February 18, 2007 Report Posted February 18, 2007 Are you kidding me! Just when i thought it was all going to be ok and then BAM, you go and make it bad again! Come on Jacky its up to you now! You can save them! I have faith in you! Great chapter, Marthas not guilty, you did good there! But now the girls are gone! I know youl make it better in the next chapter though, otherwise i might be forced to do some serious damage Looking forward to the next one
Tasha Posted February 19, 2007 Report Posted February 19, 2007 Fuj, can I kill you first?? Unless someone has already shot gun it. How could you do that to poor Martha -hmph- your mean. Now bring the girls back
baby gurl Posted February 20, 2007 Report Posted February 20, 2007 Hey guys thanks for the replies I have some news: I have exams from tomorrow till friday leaving me not alot of time to update...I may get a chance to but I may not Because I don't want to get behind on the fic what I was thinking is that if I post a chapter today and write the next couple of chapters could I send it to someone on MSN and could you post it for me please? That way I won't be behind and you'll all still get to read it...If any one has time to post chapters then please could you reply? FUJ...XX
baby gurl Posted February 20, 2007 Report Posted February 20, 2007 “Martha.” Jack shouted. “Martha. Here you are. I was getting worried.” Jack told her gently. He had looked for Martha everywhere since she ran out of the house. They were now on the beach both silent. Martha was looking into the ocean whilst Jack was trying to think how to make her feel better. “Have the police found anything yet?” Martha asked breaking the silence but still not looking at Jack. Jack sighed. “No. Sorry. But they will. The girls are strong, Martha. They’ll be fine.” “How do you know that Jack? Anyone could have taken them. You read the note. You saw how it said that I won’t see the girls again. Its all my fault. I killed Gregg and now his family want to hurt me. Well they succeeded. I hope they’re happy. I’m never going to see my daughters again.” She sobbed. “Listen to me, Martha. We got through the case together and we’ll get through this. The girls will be home soon, I promise.” He told her giving her a hug. “Your right. I have to think positive for the girl’ sake.” She told him as he placed a kiss on her head. == It had been an hour and there had still been no news. Suddenly the phone rang. Martha ran to it as she answered it. “Hello.” She said. “Hello Martha.” Martha heard down the line. “May!” Martha exclaimed. “Where are the girls?” She asked. “Don’t worry they’re fine. I thought you may want to say a final goodbye to them before…” “Before what?” Martha shouted. The line went dead. = *Can Jack keep his promise? *What does May have in store for the girls'? please reply...xx
vale4eva Posted February 20, 2007 Report Posted February 20, 2007 Dum Dum Dum! How could you leave it there! And yes Jacky will keep his promise and the girls will come home safe and sound, wont they Fuj! I want a hug from Jack! Hmm big Jacky hug! *opens arms to recieve hug* Awww Great chapter, things are never nice and normal where Jack and Martha are concerned are they! Looking forward to the next one. Oh and good luck in your exams! I know what it feels like, thankfully mine are over now
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