vale4eva Posted March 1, 2007 Report Posted March 1, 2007 They better had do! Poor Martha! (I seem to be saying that alot in these fics! Whats up with that!? lol) Great chapter, looking forward to the next one
xsianx Posted March 1, 2007 Report Posted March 1, 2007 An update. Yay and on my Bday I hope the girls are ok. A good twist would be one dead but thats me being eveil because I'm so damn excited I'm meeting the fittest guy in wales!!
baby gurl Posted March 1, 2007 Report Posted March 1, 2007 Lol!! Happy birthday Sian as it is your birthday I shall update later...Oh btw when Becky's on msn ask her what happens I told her...(The joys of msn!!!) xx
Tasha Posted March 1, 2007 Report Posted March 1, 2007 Yay, go get your girls Martha. Great chapter More please
baby gurl Posted March 6, 2007 Report Posted March 6, 2007 Thanks for the replies guys...Sorry I havn't updated in a while...Dediacted to Miz Sian..x = As Jack pulled over, Martha ran out of the car and slammed the door shut. "Jade." She shouted. "Kayla." Tears were running down her face, worry was showing and fear was stricking in her heart. "Martha wait." Jack shouted as he caught up with her. "I have to find them Jack." She cried. "I know." He told her softly. "Come on," he told her as they walked in search for the girls. A minute later a screeching noise was heard. "What was that?" Martha trembled. "I don't know." Jack told her. "Come on." He said. As they walked over to where the noise was coming from, they both saw May there with Kayla. Then she saw that Jade was no where in sight. "Give me back my f***ing daughters." Martha beemed. "Don't come another step closer or I will shoot her." May told her as she held a gun at Kayla's head. Martha immediatly stepped aside, knowing full well what May was capable of. "Please." Martha begged. "Just give me my daughters back." She cried. "What?" May laughed. "I'll tell you what you can have her." She laughed. "I'll just keep the other brat." "Look I know your upset and angry with me but if you just give me them both then..." "Now you listen to me, Martha Mackenzie!" May shouted. "You killed my brother. What the hell do you expect? Me to give you both of your daughters back and live as happy as Larry?" Martha stood there quiet. "Well let me tell you something sunshine. Your not ever going to see your daughter again." She laughed. "Listen." Jack spoke for the first time since they had seen May. "If you just tell us where Jade is and give Kayla to us then in the station we'll go light on you. You won't be in prison for too long." He reasoned. "Ha!" She laughed. "Prison? You think I care about f***ing prison. Who the f*** do I have to live for now? Now that this b**** killed my brother? I don't care about prison." All of a sudden, something had hit May to the floor, causing her to let go of Kayla. "Kayla." Martha cried as her daughter ran over to her. "Mum." Her daughter cried harder. == *Where is Jade? *Who has Jade? *Will they find her soon? Please comment....xx
Zetti Posted March 6, 2007 Report Posted March 6, 2007 Just make Jade safe and i will forget all previous bad things i may do to you! More soon xxx
beckyboo Posted March 6, 2007 Report Posted March 6, 2007 Great chapter Ithink shes gonna do what she told me she was going to do am I right! Update soon hun xxxxxxxxxx
vale4eva Posted March 6, 2007 Report Posted March 6, 2007 I hope Jades alright! Jacky will save the day, im sure of it! Jacky to the rescue!!! Update soon
gawguss_tiff Posted March 6, 2007 Report Posted March 6, 2007 argh where's Jade?... maybe Jade was the one who hit may with something?.. i hope thats it lol ... wow this May girl is certainly CRAZY lol ... well update ASAP xoxox
Tasha Posted March 6, 2007 Report Posted March 6, 2007 What knocked May out??? But im glad Kayla is alright. Now Jade's turn. Come back Jade. SuperJack to the rescue More please
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