baby gurl Posted March 8, 2007 Report Posted March 8, 2007 Hey guys heres the next chapter.. I would say enjoy but I doubt you would!! = "Are you ok?" Jack asked Kayla as Martha pulled away from her daughter. Kayla nodded. "Where's Jade?" She asked. "Well we were hoping you could tell us that." Said a voice from behind. "Peter." Martha sighed. "Thank you. If you hadn't of done what you did then I don't know what I would have done. My daughter probably wouldn't be standing here." She told him gratefully. "No problem." He told Martha. "How are you Kayla?" He asked. Kayla nodded again showing Peter that she was ok. "Where's Jade?" She asked once again. "Well, we don't know. We were hoping you could give a statement and maybe that could give us some links to tell us where your sister is." "Sure." She said. = JADE "Where the f*** are you taking me?" I screamed. I knew who it was even though he was trying to hide his identity. "Less of the lip girl." He told her sternly. "Although who can blame you with a mother like yours." He added. "Don't you dare talk about my mother like that you s*** face." I sneered. "Come on princess, lighten up." He laughed. "Don't call me princess, you son of a b****" I shouted. "I know who you are." I added. "Really?" He asked sarcasticly. "Yes. Your Mabon." I told him. "How do you know that?" He asked me shocked. "You really think I'm that stupid?" I asked laughing. This guy is such an idiot. "Your one of May's other brothers. I know you all." I told him. "Now let me out you mother f*****." "I don't think so, Jade. But I've got some advice for you. If I was you I'd stop screaming. You carry on like that and I'll make sure your sister dies." He laughed. I couldn't risk that. I sat there. Not knowing where I was. Where I was going. If I'd ever see my family again. Silently I thought. ____ Please tell me what you think xx
gawguss_tiff Posted March 8, 2007 Report Posted March 8, 2007 aww poor jade what the hell is with these stupid idiots and taking incocent children gah arses lol update ASAP
vale4eva Posted March 8, 2007 Report Posted March 8, 2007 Golly, how old is Jade? Shes got a foul mouth on her lol But i can hardly blame her considering the situation shes in. Jack better do something pronto before she gets hurt! I know he'l save the day Update soon
beckyboo Posted March 8, 2007 Report Posted March 8, 2007 AWWWW Poor Jade and Kayla Poor Martha and Jack AWWWWWWWW poor everyone except for May!!!!! Great chapter I no whats goning to happen Update soon xxxxxxxx
baby gurl Posted March 8, 2007 Report Posted March 8, 2007 Lol!!! I know you do Becky!!! I'm thinking of combining the twon idea's I gave you...x
Tasha Posted March 8, 2007 Report Posted March 8, 2007 Wow, Jade has a potty mouth -shakes head in disgust- Anyways, Jade Kayla is safe in the arms of your mother, so go screaming all you want Great chapter More please
Zetti Posted March 9, 2007 Report Posted March 9, 2007 Great chapter! You have me in a good mood so i will make something good happen in my fics!
>>Emma<< Posted March 9, 2007 Report Posted March 9, 2007 I haven't commented for a while so here goes... That was great Fuj! All of the chapters since I last commented have been really good, and the storyline is great I hope Jade get's found, but then in a sense I hope she doesn't because if she doesn't then it would make it interesting Martha, I think she should kill Jack, because somehow...it's Jack's fault for Jade dying. Somehow. Anyways, I think you should kill Jack somehow, maybe a bolt of lightening... Great chappys, update soon, I can't wait to find out what happens!
baby gurl Posted May 10, 2007 Report Posted May 10, 2007 Hey guys thanks for all of your great comments! Sorry this fic hasn’t been updated in a while I’ve been busy revising for exams (which are this week!) Lol. Please don’t all kill me at once- Here’s the next chapter: Enjoy…xx … JADE “Where are we?” I ask Mabon. “Oh, your up then princess.” He smugs. “Don’t call me princess.” I scream. “Now where the hell are we?” I ask through gritted teeth. “Airport.” He laughs. “No.” I say quietly. That’s all that would come out of my mouth. = “We’ll find her.” Jack assured Martha, rubbing her back. “What if we don’t?” Martha asked quiet enough so that just Jack hears her. “We will. You got to stay positive. Not just for your self but for Kayla and Jade. And for the baby.” He added. “To be quiet honest this baby could die for all I care.” Martha said a little harshly. “Now I want to speak to May.” “I’m sorry Martha you can’t.” Said McGrath from behind. “This woman knows where my daughter is. I need to speak to her.” Martha said raising her voice. “Do you really think she’s going to tell you? You out of all people. You killed her brother for crying out loud!” He stated rudely. “He beat me, you b*****d! And anyway what would you like me to do? She asked. “Sit here and let my daughter be taken away from me? I don’t think so, ‘coz if you don’t do something, I will.” “I’m going to interview her now. So hopefully she’ll talk.” “Fine.” She huffed as she sat back down. = JADE Last call for destination France boarding flight 206, please make your way to the boarding area.” I hear as the speaker echo’s in my ear. I have to say something. Otherwise it’ll be too late. I open my mouth to scream, but something’s stopping me. Kayla. I can’t let anything happen to her.
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