baby gurl Posted January 22, 2007 Report Posted January 22, 2007 i would update but im soooooo tired!
baby gurl Posted January 22, 2007 Report Posted January 22, 2007 paris you really know how to tire a gurl out don't u?! x
baby gurl Posted January 22, 2007 Report Posted January 22, 2007 this is for bekky! a belated b'day present... ____ "Omg!" Martha screamed. "Aaaaghhh." Gregg groaned in pain. "Gregg. I'm so sorry." Martha cried. "Martha help me please." Martha hesitated. "Please." Martha ran into the living room and punched the buttons in. "Hello, I need an ambulance. Ok. Thank you." "Mum what's happened?" Kayla asked. "Aaaaaaagh" she screamed horrified. A few minutes later the ambulance had arrived and Gregg had been taken away. Along with the ambulance the cops had arrived aswell. _____ Martha, Kayla and Jade were all waiting in the hospital when a cop with brown hair and brown eyes came walking towards her. "Hi, Martha Mackenzie?" Martha nodded. "I'm Constable Jack Holden. I need you to come to the station with me." Martha nodded as she went with the cop. _____ I know its short but I'm very tired and everyone's asking for an update and there you go....thats all i can do untill 2morrow! xxx -next chapter jack takes martha's interview.
xsianx Posted January 22, 2007 Report Posted January 22, 2007 I shouldn't support violence Go Martha! Aww Jack wants to put his handcuffs on you Martha!
>>Emma<< Posted January 22, 2007 Report Posted January 22, 2007 They finally meet! Great chapter. Martha better not get done for muder. More soon please.
beckyboo Posted January 22, 2007 Report Posted January 22, 2007 That was good but it was short so update again once more!!!!!!!!!!!
Tasha Posted January 23, 2007 Report Posted January 23, 2007 ok what happened to Gregg??? And Jack Great chapt More please
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