baby gurl Posted February 4, 2007 Report Posted February 4, 2007 ^ lol I wasn't I thought they were 10! lmao. Good writing. sian wasn't/isn't a naughty teenager...some how find that hard to believe!!! sian they're 10 in my fic!!! that was a brill chapter emma....more soon..xx
beckyboo Posted February 4, 2007 Report Posted February 4, 2007 Hey This is a great fic update soon xxxxxx
Guest [x]whacko[x]jen[x] Posted February 9, 2007 Report Posted February 9, 2007 tis is really good emma ;) keep goin plz im locked in me room, nooooooo! 1
Sarah_Lewis Posted March 7, 2007 Report Posted March 7, 2007 omg can someone help me finish dis fic?? lol im stuck
Sarah_Lewis Posted March 8, 2007 Report Posted March 8, 2007 Ok guys sorry this is a short and probably stupid ending but here it is LOL: Skye couldn’t believe Sophie was drunk, she didn’t drink much, how am I supposed to explain this to mum and dad they’re going to know we went to the party now, “Didn’t I tell you two not to go to this party?!!” said Martha Angrily, she couldn’t believe her daughters had betrayed her, “Mum you didn’t expect us not to go, its not my fault Sophie got drunk, she wasn’t with me the whole time!!” replied Skye, trying to make excuses, “well for doing that you two are grounded for two weeks!!” said Martha, punishing them for what they did, “what Mum you cant do that I so so hate you right now, **** you!!” replied a drunk Sophie crying, “Sophie go to your room now, I wont tolerate you speaking to me like that its unacceptable!!” said Martha, she couldn’t believe Sophie would talk to her like that, “I’m already in my room Mum cant you see that!!” replied Sophie, yelling at her mum, “well you can stay in there and only come out when you go to school!” said Martha, “what that is just plain cruel, you cant lock me in here!!” replied Sophie storming out of her room and going out the front door.
baby gurl Posted March 8, 2007 Report Posted March 8, 2007 Its finished Haha shame on Sophie & Skye...tut tut shouldn't be talking to their mum like that..I thought Martha was too nice with their punishments it was only a couple of weeks!!!! This was a great fic..xxx
Sarah_Lewis Posted March 8, 2007 Report Posted March 8, 2007 Thanks Fuj =]] I think i may do another J&M fan fic =]
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