-ParaisGal- Posted October 24, 2006 Report Posted October 24, 2006 (edited) Thanks. I think there have been fics like this around, involving kids of jack or mac. Edited October 24, 2006 by Home&AwayGal Quote
xxgulcanxx Posted October 24, 2006 Report Posted October 24, 2006 I don't think i've read any fics like this, but oh well Quote
~Rosey~ Posted October 24, 2006 Report Posted October 24, 2006 Ha. Great update. You konw me to well Paris. Quote
>>Emma<< Posted October 25, 2006 Report Posted October 25, 2006 That was fantastic, when I read that Jack had a kid and Martha didn't know I was thinking nooooooooo, you can't break them up for a kid, but then Martha was really sweet and they were just so adorable, now they can be one big happy family and they're going to have another baby soon could this fic get any better? Well it could when Martha has her baby but thats six months away so for the time being it is the best it could possibly be Loved it as per usual. You're a great writer and I love your updates. They're brilliant Please update asap, fantastic Quote
-ParaisGal- Posted October 25, 2006 Report Posted October 25, 2006 I need some advice. Is mine too bunched? Should I have each new characters line on a different line, because it looks REALLY short when in essence it isn't that short. Quote
SfanS Posted October 25, 2006 Report Posted October 25, 2006 bunched? Not really....it does look a bit squashed, though. I just read it all....love it! Awww, Callie sounds so cute! Quote
>>Emma<< Posted October 25, 2006 Report Posted October 25, 2006 They are such a sweet and happy family, I love it! It's fantastic, please update asap, I want to read more now. Callie is so sweet, and I had completely forgot that Martha had never met Tony and Luc before, I was like what? They've never met! But then I figured it out lol, I'm a bit slow today. Great writing, I want more now!!! Please update soon. Quote
-ParaisGal- Posted October 25, 2006 Report Posted October 25, 2006 I asked this on HAAC, but is the style weird? Should I averte to the previous? I've just never written like that before. But I asked Kase, and she suggested something like this, so yeah. Thanks Kase, BTW. Quote
>>Emma<< Posted October 25, 2006 Report Posted October 25, 2006 No it's not strange, I really like it, I like both of the styles that you have done. You write both of them really well. Quote
xxgulcanxx Posted October 25, 2006 Report Posted October 25, 2006 Great chapter as usual, don't worry about the style, it's perfect please update soon Quote
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