kase Posted June 15, 2006 Report Posted June 15, 2006 great! thanks for updating i love how you've included lara! Quote
Jamey-Maria Posted June 15, 2006 Report Posted June 15, 2006 “Hey come one we've got to think positive now, Serena's going to be fine, she's going to wake up and then she's going to come home with us. Then Mr Macklin's lawyers are going to find a way to bring Jack home and we'll all be together again, hey doesn't that sound good?” Tony told them trying to cheer everybody up. Tony your living in dreamland. Didn't see the Lara thing coming, well done! Dolly you've definitley done your homework with all this "Acute myelogenous Leukemia" Just looking at it sends my head into a spin, lol! To be ohnest i don't have anything to say about Serena as i don't care about her, just glad she's not pregnant! Great chapter as usual, please update soon! Oh and how's poor Jack doing.........? Quote
Jamey-Maria Posted June 16, 2006 Report Posted June 16, 2006 Awww Dylan sounds like one of the most adorable children, well he does share the same genes as Martha and Jack so that was a given:P Anyway for some reason i am only just starting to picture Jack in that prison uniform, the green shirt and shorts and he looks really cute:P (weird i know) I will say it again, Serena DON'T DIE! Only because.....well read my previous posts, can't be bother to say it again, lol! Anway Dolly that was a great chapter, please update soon. Quote
katie343 Posted June 16, 2006 Report Posted June 16, 2006 aww poor Dylan he's so confused poor Jack especially coz he can't visit her and might never so her again please update soon Quote
Jacksthehottest Posted June 16, 2006 Author Report Posted June 16, 2006 aww poor jack, i feel so soryy for him...hope serena survives even though i dnt want her wit jack...plz update soon Quote
bay girl Posted June 18, 2006 Report Posted June 18, 2006 Yay, an update. I really love this fic. The only bad thing i have to say about this is that there aren't enough Jack/Martha scenes.LOL. Other than that, this fic is really good. Quote
Jamey-Maria Posted June 18, 2006 Report Posted June 18, 2006 Dolly i'm very sorry but at the moment i can't give your writing any criticism. I will be sur to tell you though if i have some. Oh actually yes, can you please put in those >************************* when a scene ends, makes it much easier to read (although that is hardly a criticism) Anyway, why are you doing this? Your making me feel bad for Serena. I don't want to feel bad for Serena! Please update soon:D Quote
katie343 Posted June 18, 2006 Report Posted June 18, 2006 Yeah needs more J + M scenes please update soon Quote
Jamey-Maria Posted June 18, 2006 Report Posted June 18, 2006 (edited) Pleeeeeeeease. NO MORE "i love you's" between Serena and Jack, i'm going to need a bucket! That Matt is a nasty piece of work! Great chapter, please update soon! Edited June 18, 2006 by jacknmarthaluver Quote
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