bay girl Posted July 24, 2006 Report Posted July 24, 2006 Yay. Woo hoo. Now all we need is for Serena to go away and for Jack to get out of prison. Then they can be together forever. But knowing you, you won't make it that easy. Meanie. Excellent chapter. Hope to read some more soon. Quote
Nicom Posted July 24, 2006 Report Posted July 24, 2006 Wow! I just caught up!! *dances* Lol. The last chapter has to be the BEST by far! Serena being tripped up, AND Martha and Jack's 'moment'! I'm so proud of me for catching up. Lol. I'm so proud of you dolly for writing such incredible chapters!! More soon please! Oh yeah, and what the hell is going off with this confusing file? lol. Quote
dolly-999 Posted July 24, 2006 Report Posted July 24, 2006 ^^well done Nicole for being the first to notice it. You'll see all in good time my friend. Quote
xsianx Posted July 25, 2006 Report Posted July 25, 2006 (edited) I'm happy that Jack and Martha are getting it on But poor Serena hope she gets well and finds her prince and not Marthas. Anyway good chapter, update ASAP! Edited July 25, 2006 by xsianx Quote
Nicom Posted July 25, 2006 Report Posted July 25, 2006 I'm happy that Jack and Martha are getting it on But poor Serena hope she gets well and finds her prince and not Marthas. Anyway good chapter, update ASAP! What she said. Quote
bay girl Posted July 26, 2006 Report Posted July 26, 2006 If only Jack was out of prison. Then he and Martha could have some real fun. LOL Great update. Hope to read some more soon. Quote
Jamey-Maria Posted July 26, 2006 Report Posted July 26, 2006 Can't say i'm that upset about Serena but i hope someone finds her and helps her. Please update soon. Quote
jack4martha_forever Posted July 26, 2006 Report Posted July 26, 2006 (edited) Wow. I just read the whole fic. Its really good. The writer is really talented. Congrats. But can i just ask, since im not bothered reading the first couple of stories before this, why is Jack in prison? I know he did something to protect Dylan, Martha and Serena, but what did he do? And how long is his sentence? Please update soon:) Edited July 26, 2006 by jack4martha_forever Quote
dolly-999 Posted July 26, 2006 Report Posted July 26, 2006 (edited) ^^Thanks Well basically there was this guy called Sean Loyd and he murdered him, you'd have to read the second story in the series to understand the ins and outs of it all, and he's in Jail for thirteen years, and already been there for 2 years. Hope that helps. But if you change your mind and decide to read them then there here on Fan fiction.net, I don't think there on this site anymore cos the system deletes things when they get to a certain age, but anyway here they are: 1. Some life for a princess: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2817534/1/ 2. A shattered hearts dreams: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2929881/1/ Edited July 26, 2006 by dolly-999 Quote
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