kase Posted October 25, 2006 Report Posted October 25, 2006 Eee! I expected an awkward, uncomfortable confrontation with so much tension. But that was a million times better and more than I could have wished for (except to have them passionately throw themselves at each other, declare their love for one another, and reunite in that moment...then and there!) Aww, that Mattie and Lucas hug was so sweet. I'm also looking forward to the reckless fun the girls have installed. Well done Jess Quote
sevenpuddings Posted October 25, 2006 Report Posted October 25, 2006 Me, write an awkward, tension filled reunion? Lord no, that comes later I'm so glad you all enjoyed it. And yes Kat, the 'it' chapter, the one everyone couldn't wait to read! I think that makes it an 'it' chapter. Hopefully, my muse is returning, and there will be another update soon. Hopefully! Quote
summer_bay_rules Posted October 25, 2006 Report Posted October 25, 2006 Yay! I'm glad they've all been reunited! Update soon. Quote
shawtyy Posted October 25, 2006 Report Posted October 25, 2006 Awesome chapter! Sara had to spoilt the Luke and Mattie moment. Can't wait f or all the drama, update soon. Quote
tasha7905 Posted October 26, 2006 Report Posted October 26, 2006 Loved the reunion. Mattie and Lucas especially its a shame sara interrupter. Great Chapter Jess. Cant wait for more. Quote
Jackieleanne Posted October 30, 2006 Author Report Posted October 30, 2006 That was brilliant Jess I really loved it awww poor Mattie bottling everything up inside her and I loved her and Bella they are just so totally cute. I don't not like Sara its just that I love Mattie and Lucas together so much especially in this series. Great writing yet again Jess. Quote
Skykat Posted October 30, 2006 Report Posted October 30, 2006 I quite like Sara, she seems nice but I get this sense that she could be quite nasty when protecting what's hers... Great chapter. Loved the lucas/Kit stuff and the Matilda/Lucas almost conversation. You can almost feel the tension yet I'm sensing the chemistry's not the same as it was, that they've grown apart and don't really want to...I may be way off the mark though, or maybe they just haven't realised they still want each other, or they have and won't admit it? Hmm...I'm baffling myself with theories now! it's a good writer who really gets me thinking about plots, I usially just go with the flow and that, in case you didn't get it Jess, was a compliment Quote
-Jade- Posted October 31, 2006 Report Posted October 31, 2006 (edited) I think shes sweet... Like hell you do. Edited October 31, 2006 by jackandmartha!!! Quote
kase Posted October 31, 2006 Report Posted October 31, 2006 (edited) That was a great update Jess. And I actually like Sara too. I've never disliked her, Parker I'm not sure I could trust yet. In fact, reading this chapter from Lucas' point of view, it actually made me sympathise with Sara so much. I like her as a character, the shy and timid girl. I could see why she would be feeling threatened. She's the type of girl I could easily picture Lucas with. I also really liked the start And while I want Lucas and Mattie together, I would feel terrible for her. That fear at the end was so sad! As for Mattie and Luke? It was sweet, it really was. Lucas' POV of her was great. I had a sense of him rediscovering her, as a new person at times. Maybe thats just me And Mattie and the bubs are so gorgeous! And I absolutely loved the Kit and Lucas scene!! That was a great addition and I loved it when she called him "little bro." It was just Aww. Edited October 31, 2006 by kase Quote
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