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Great start Nicole. Loving it. Im glad Jack and Sam are no more, and i cant wiat to see Jack's reaction, or well read about Jacks reaction to Martha's new secret life :D

More please :D

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Nicole, I really think that this is amazing. Seriously, the writing is your best, and I love the fact that you're pushing yourself with the subject. :P Really really terrific stuff. And I love the title! Inspired. *nods*

Your writing just gets better and better, seriously. I can't wait for the next bit! (As in, the next bit that i haven't read :P)

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I have been waiting for this to be posted and I'm so glad that you have!

A great start to what is going to be the best storyline. I can't wait to see Martha spiral downwards, only because you seem to write these things so well!

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Yay, you started another fic. I love it already, Jack isn't with Sam :D. Your writing is brilliant and this is a great start

“Helping her with deliveries my arse.” Kim whispered, before sitting in front of Jack.

Hehehe loved that line. Please update soon

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Great start! I'm so glad you've decided to post this fic :)

You may post as often as you like :P

Jack needs to get his ass into gear and talk some sense into out 'lost' Martha. Please update soon!

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I love it! but the best part has to be there's no Sam. Thank you. :)

Beautiful description.

Come on Jack, save Martha before it's too late.. . I don't like Mike. I bet he's ugly.

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Yay Nicole you have finally posted the fic behind the graphic! lol And it was really really good! Your writing and descriptions are soooo good! I loved it all! (Well except for the fact Jack and Martha arent together but then we wouldnt really have a story now would we! Hehe!) Cant wait for more and to see where this goes, something tells me Jacks not going to be a happy bunny when he finds out where Martha is working now! Hehe! Update soon! :)

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