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[Martha_Jack]

That was good can not wait into an update.

[-ParaisGal-]

Well written. I love this!

Is she and Jack going to be an item? And get her outta that club. lol. She belongs in Noah's, with Jack

Keep going and update soon (I hope)

[Tasha]

Great start Nicole. Loving it. Im glad Jack and Sam are no more, and i cant wiat to see Jack's reaction, or well read about Jacks reaction to Martha's new secret life

More please

[-Jade-]

Nicole, I really think that this is amazing. Seriously, the writing is your best, and I love the fact that you're pushing yourself with the subject. Really really terrific stuff. And I love the title! Inspired. *nods*

Your writing just gets better and better, seriously. I can't wait for the next bit! (As in, the next bit that i haven't read )

[linzie_mac01]

I have been waiting for this to be posted and I'm so glad that you have!

A great start to what is going to be the best storyline. I can't wait to see Martha spiral downwards, only because you seem to write these things so well!

[Jacksthehottest]

Yay, you started another fic. I love it already, Jack isn't with Sam . Your writing is brilliant and this is a great start

“Helping her with deliveries my arse.” Kim whispered, before sitting in front of Jack.

Hehehe loved that line. Please update soon

[Zetti]

I love this

please update soon

[puja]

Great start! I'm so glad you've decided to post this fic

You may post as often as you like

Jack needs to get his ass into gear and talk some sense into out 'lost' Martha. Please update soon!

[xsianx]

I love it! but the best part has to be there's no Sam. Thank you.

Beautiful description.

Come on Jack, save Martha before it's too late.. . I don't like Mike. I bet he's ugly.

[-Laura-]

Yay Nicole you have finally posted the fic behind the graphic! lol And it was really really good! Your writing and descriptions are soooo good! I loved it all! (Well except for the fact Jack and Martha arent together but then we wouldnt really have a story now would we! Hehe!) Cant wait for more and to see where this goes, something tells me Jacks not going to be a happy bunny when he finds out where Martha is working now! Hehe! Update soon!