Cerise Posted February 24, 2007 Report Posted February 24, 2007 Awesome Update, Nicole. Great Writing, hope Jack can go back to work. Update soon xxx
~Amy~ Posted February 24, 2007 Report Posted February 24, 2007 YAY for Jack! I sense this Hannah's gonna be a cow.
vale4eva Posted February 24, 2007 Report Posted February 24, 2007 Aww great chapter. Jack and Martha still care about eachother, its nice that their such great pal's! Martha needs to get the hell outa there before she gets sucked in even more. And im sensing that Hannah isnt as great a friend as Martha thinks she is. Martha deserves better than this, even if she does annoy me sometimes. Hmm, heres a thought, maybe Jacks taken to do some undercover work at that club! And he sees Martha! Ooo, thatd be interesting. I hope hes taken somewhere good, somewhere where he can use his macho muscles to beat the crums out of the bad guys Yay! Excellent work Nic, Looking forward to the next chapter
loobieloo Posted February 24, 2007 Report Posted February 24, 2007 That was a fabby chapter Nic, I love the way this fic is different, its good Your writing is excellent, cant wait to see more of it soon.
llama711 Posted February 25, 2007 Report Posted February 25, 2007 great chaapter so happy martha and jack are still friends plz update soon xx
Tasha Posted February 25, 2007 Report Posted February 25, 2007 Mike's a sleeze (duh!) Poor Martha. Great chapter. Jacky's going to go back to work, and he'll be sent to Martha's work and he'll see Martha on stage and she's in trouble More please
gawguss_tiff Posted February 25, 2007 Report Posted February 25, 2007 ARGH i cant wait for this stroy line on home and away lol ... this is a great fic i love it update ASAP rics just parnoid aye Jack lol XOXO
bay girl Posted February 25, 2007 Report Posted February 25, 2007 Great update Nic. I'm so laughing if Jack turns up at the club. Heart coronary for him; there will be. LOL. Looking forward to the next update.
>>Emma<< Posted February 25, 2007 Report Posted February 25, 2007 Fab chapter Nicole. I'm so happy that Jack and Martha are still friends, they seem so sweet together, like when they first got together... I want Jack to go to the club and find Martha and be her hero and take her out of there, be her night in shinning armour. Jack should definitely go. Make a mental note of that Nicole Martha needs to see what a horrible person her boyfriend is. She shouldn't even go out with him. And that Hannah is such a bad friend! Well I wouldn't even call her that... Update soon, can't wait for more!
xsianx Posted February 26, 2007 Report Posted February 26, 2007 Superb! I kind of don't want Martha to get hurt She has no luck.
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