vale4eva Posted March 4, 2007 Report Posted March 4, 2007 Great chapter. Ha! Jacks going to probably see Martha pole dancing, but why would he be upset about that Poor Martha, working in a sleezy joint like that! And that Hannahs a right bi*ch! Martha deserves better. Cant wait to see what Jacks going to do when (or if) he sees Martha. Update soon
linzie_mac01 Posted March 4, 2007 Report Posted March 4, 2007 He he he Can't wait for Jack to see Martha, or for Martha to see Jack! That was a great chapter, god the girls in that club are so two-faced, Martha really needs to get a grip and just walk out of the place!
Zetti Posted March 4, 2007 Report Posted March 4, 2007 Yep i agree. Jack hurry up and get Martha out!
xsianx Posted March 4, 2007 Report Posted March 4, 2007 Jack probably wants a private show Great writing Nic
beckyboo Posted March 4, 2007 Report Posted March 4, 2007 Sian I agree Jacky does But noooo Nic you did not just leave it there! Update ASAP
Jacksthehottest Posted March 5, 2007 Report Posted March 5, 2007 Ohhh I wanted to read more and you left it there lol. Can't wait for them to see each other if it does happen. Please update soon, brilliant writing
gawguss_tiff Posted March 5, 2007 Report Posted March 5, 2007 ooooo i soooo cant wait until jack sees her lol UPDATE ASAP XOXO
-Laura- Posted March 6, 2007 Report Posted March 6, 2007 Oooh good chapter Nicole! But something tells me Jacks not going to be a happy bunny if he sees Martha dancing on the stage in her 'uniform'! lol Update soon, cant wait to see what happens next!
~Amy~ Posted March 8, 2007 Report Posted March 8, 2007 Brill chapter! I can't believe hannah's such a cow. Sleeping with her friends boyfriend *tut tut* Ooooh Jacks gonna see her! Brilliant idea Brill writing Nicole, update soon.
llama711 Posted March 9, 2007 Report Posted March 9, 2007 plz update soon really want to see what happens when jack sees her dancing xx
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