Twisted Tales - Reborn (by JosieTash, wanda, Di and belgshep) - comments

[The Phoenix]

a huge revolting seven-headed demon, each of whom’s heads looks just like Dani and keeps saying “Me, Me, Me, Me, Me, Me, Me…†(and that’s seven whiny voices all at once!!!!!!!!!).

Sounds like a horror film!

[JosieTash]

belgshep, this is SOOOOOOOOO great !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It's like you were born to write Twisted Tales

There is sooooooooooooooooo much to LOVE about this ..... Beth's singing breasts, the aliens avoid earth because of Leah etc, the Dani monster, Cassie's egg, Hayley's son, the stem cell bit (V nice V topical subject), Kong in the bay (love the lighthouse bit), Shelley proof bit, Tilly & Gypsy in skin tight leather, the references to Rhys netball thing is CLASSIC etc ............. LOVE it ALLL !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Edited January 5, 2006 by JosieTash

[belgshep]

I really love ALL of this! Especially love that Kane now thinks he’s Craig Palmer – well, at least some of the time anyway (that was a brilliant idea!!!) Love that Planknocchio has now become a real boy (he, he, he!). Totally amazing that Martha now seems to be in a water-filled K-mart mug!!!!!!!!!!!!! … And great idea to make Cassie and Ric’s baby a kangaroo!! Also, wonderful that we now have a teenage Irene!! (The Phoenix – loved your comments about the Dani monster after Chapter 17. Now we have seven Rhys heads too. How scary/bad can it get?)

[The Phoenix]

How could it get worse? Thats easy...

A seven mouthed leah

[belgshep]

  The Phoenix said:

How could it get worse? Thats easy...

A seven mouthed leah

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Ah yes, how right you are!!!!!

[JosieTash]

The Phoenix, that's a GREAT possible idea for a future chapter !!!!!!!!!!

belgshep, soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo glad that you LOVE my lastest work ........... wrriting Twisted is sooooooooooooooooooooooooo much fun !!!!!!!!

Edited January 13, 2006 by JosieTash

[JosieTash]

There is soooooooooooooooo much to L-O-V-E LOVE here …………

The names of the dino ppl doctors (and making Rachel one of the dino ppl); including yourself in the tales; rhys’s football head; all the sci-fi/cult TV (stat trek, charmed, gorilla planet etc) references - which are esp. ironic since, as I read this, I’m wearing my Seven Of Nine (star trek - Voyager) T shirt; Skippy’s quest for vengeance; 10 year old Irene; the kane/craig/car crash thing; the dani/rhys monster paragraph; all the Beth bits ….. and, well, EVERYTHING !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I will soooooooooooooooooooooo have to put my thinking cap on the come up with ideas to match this GREAT chapter !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Tashas angel]

Its great.

[belgshep]

That was quick -- amazing!!

Love all your fab ideas: exorcising Kane and having real Craig appear, Martha the Jedi!!!!!, Rhys’s netball head, Scotland as the location of copperina, Angie on the Witches Council, etc., etc., etc. …

‘Fraid the next chapter won't be so quick as it takes me a while to think of ideas!!!!!!!

[JosieTash]

Ch 22 is FABULOUS !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LOVE soooooooooooooooooo much about it - Sue & the telepahy, rhy's waxhead disastar, colleen's FANTASTIC line, baby piipa's plans, the carnivore wanting MOrag to be its mum, Beth's outspoken "assets", carig & the numbers bit, Shannon & Co's search ................. well, just, EVERYTHING !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!