Only With Your Smile (by xGlowingAngelx) - comments

[-Jade-]

Hopefully she's hiring a hit man to kill Jack

^^ That's what I thought! Nicole what is up with you??

[Nicom]

*stifles laugh*

OMG! Why am I doing this? I thought I'd forgiven Jack.

Obviously not. lol

Then again, I'm in a wierd mood tonight.

EDIT: I forgot to talk about your fic, AGAIN! lol.

Great, bravo! You don't actually need me to comment anymore, you know what I'll say. The same threats.. the same compliments... I'm doing the Jack hating stuff for you! Just to make YOU happy! Lol.

Edited July 6, 2006 by xxNicolexx

[Jamey-Maria]

Why does it just so happen that Jack had to walk in at that very moment and see that very sight...... o i know, because they might of actually been able to sort things out and be happy......... and we can't have that now can we, lol? Great chapter, please update soon

[-michelle-]

Please update soon

[-Annie-]

Grr, you are so evil - Martha and Jack must be together forever! LOL. That pesky Justin, go away you little bumbum!

Anyway, brilliant chapter! Look forward to next update!!

xx

[ldscott]

Brilliant chapter as always!

Go away Justin- Jack and Martha are meant to be!

[-Jade-]

omg!! that was a brilliant chapter!! Fantastic writing!! Please please update ASAP!!!!!

[Nicom]

This day is just getting better..

(And that wasn't a quote. lol)

*gob smacked*

[xGlowingAngelx]

Chapter 28

Jack remained infront of Martha. He opened his mouth to speak, but he couldn't seem to find what he wanted to say. Martha bit her lip, praying he would say something....anything and break the awkward silence. She reached out her hand to touch his, but he pulled away. Slowly he backed away from her, steadying his balance as much as possible. Martha looked at the expression that stayed painted onto his face, and she couldn't tell whether he was going to cry or laugh. "Jack, please. Say something..." she said, trying to hold back the tears. Jack placed his head into his hands. "I....I have to go" he stammered. Martha watched him as he backed away, towards the door.

"Go where?" she asked. He blinked a few times and grabbed the door handle. "To...erm...I don't know...anywhere....bye" he said. His breathing seemed to be pacing. He grabbed the handle of the door with his hand, which was shaking and opened it. Martha watched as he walked out, closing the door behind him. Standing still for a moment, she contemplated going after him, but decided against it. She knew he would need time and space, she just wondered how much time and space.

As he walked onto the beach, Jack headed for a secluded spot just beside the sea. He walked over and sat down. Picking up a handful of sand, he watched as it slipped back through his fingers, grain by grain. He wiped his hands together, removing any remaining sand and placed his head into his hands. Not long ago, he and Martha had been so happy, so in love. Now everything was going wrong.

Martha sat on the couch. She was fidgeting uncontrollably as she tried to gather her thoughts. One by one, they piled up in her mind, and she couldn't seem to budge them.

Jack sat with his head in his hands. He did love Martha, and he knew she loved him, but now so many things were changing, not only was she married but she was pregnant. He hadn't even considered asking if the baby was his. All he could think about was the mess they were in, and he was left wondering if there was any way back for them....

Edited July 7, 2006 by xGlowingAngelx

[Nicom]

"Great. Update soon." - The new Nic, as requested by yourself and jackandmartha!!!.

Edited July 7, 2006 by xxNicolexx