xsianx Posted May 30, 2006 Report Posted May 30, 2006 (edited) Love it!!! Update soon please Edited May 30, 2006 by XS-I-A-NX Quote
linzie_mac01 Posted May 30, 2006 Report Posted May 30, 2006 This is a really cool fic!!! I am really scared for Martha, that David guy is creeping me out, in an evil way. I don't like him. Where the bloody hell is Jack? Why can't he stop david from kidnapping Martha? I hope she is ok :S Quote
-Jade- Posted May 30, 2006 Report Posted May 30, 2006 I hate you and your damn cliff hangers.. Me too!! It's really not fair.... You have to update soon now! Quote
Jamey-Maria Posted May 30, 2006 Report Posted May 30, 2006 OMG, why the hell did you end it there?! That was so mean. David is a total creep and if he doesn't back off, i'm going to "lovley" his face up with a cricket bat!!! Poor Martha, for heavens sake Jack where are you? Great chapter, please, please, please update soon! Quote
katie343 Posted May 31, 2006 Report Posted May 31, 2006 david is a creep jack find martha immediatley Quote
tasha7905 Posted May 31, 2006 Report Posted May 31, 2006 Great fic, Poor Martha. I like the idea of Jack not being completely good it makes a nice change. Post again soon. Quote
Jacksthehottest Posted May 31, 2006 Report Posted May 31, 2006 lol wow sooo good bt u can't leave iut there i want to no what happnes please update soon Quote
xsianx Posted May 31, 2006 Report Posted May 31, 2006 Noo you stopped! Wow! Didnt think he would be part of the Chambers family that was as hock a good one becasue I thought it was something to do with money. Jack run in and save Martha and umm smash Davids face in. Good chapter. Please update sooon:) I love this story. x Quote
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