baby gurl Posted December 5, 2006 Report Posted December 5, 2006 (edited) heyy every1....hope u all got my post about me not being able to most for a while....so im going to try and update as much as possible......heres the next chapter...this 1's for emma coz she's driving me crazy on msn asking me what happens.... _____ "Rache, what's going on?" Asked Tony getting impatient. "Tony, i'm sorry I can't tell you until we know for certain. Look, I know that your worried but as soon as I know you'll be the first to know." Rachel resoned. "He's not going to make it is he?" Luc asked speaking for the first time since they'd been at the hospital. Tony turned around to look at Luc. He could see the tears in Luc's eyes. "Of course he is, mate. He's a Holden." Tony told him trying to smile. "Oh come on, dad. Why are you pretending? Mum was a Holden and look what happened to her. She died in the car crash. So please, dad don't give me any crap. I'm not 5 years old. I'm 15." Luc spat out. "Luc, please I know your upset, but could you please keep your voice down. This is a hospital." Rachel told him softly. "Don't worry, I'm going." Luc told her turning to face the exit. "Luc, where are you going?" Tony asked. "Don't worry dad, I'm just going out for a walk. I just need to think." Luc told him, hurrying his paste. ______ Luc was now walking along the beach, thinking of his mum and Jack. He already lost his mum. He couldn't bare to loose his brother too. He then spotted a familiar figure sitting on the sand looking out of the sea. He got closer and saw that it was Martha. "Martha." Luc said softly. Martha looked up to see luc. "Luc. Hey, is everythink alright?" She asked seeing the expression on Luc's face. Luc shook his head. "There's something you need to know." He told her quietly. "What is it?" Martha asked. "It's Jack. He. He...." Luc stutered. "He what?" Martha asked. "He was shot." Luc told her. "What?" Martha gasped. "He's in hospital now. The doctor's arn't telling me alot. All they're saying is that they're doing their best." Luc told her softly. "No!" Martha screamed. "No. No." She kept repeating. ____________ Sorry its short.....but I'm actually suppose to be doing R.e home work..... In the next chapter: Martha goes to the hospital.... Is Jack alright?Does the truth of Martha's baby finally come out? Edited December 5, 2006 by baby gurl Quote
>>Emma<< Posted December 5, 2006 Report Posted December 5, 2006 Well about time I'm only kidding, great chapter, hope Martha goes and see's him and please update soon, don't leave it too long Quote
xsianx Posted December 5, 2006 Report Posted December 5, 2006 lol I want some Brien/Tony scene now and before you bash me, I mean like Tony being all fatherly and protecting his son and Martha from Brien Quote
baby gurl Posted December 5, 2006 Report Posted December 5, 2006 lol I want some Brien/Tony scene now and before you bash me, I mean like Tony being all fatherly and protecting his son and Martha from Brien gd coz i thought u meant something else....just for u sian i'll try and fit in... Quote
baby gurl Posted December 5, 2006 Report Posted December 5, 2006 (edited) Goodnight everyone xx nite sian...you didn't say gd bye 2 me on msn... Edited December 5, 2006 by baby gurl Quote
gawguss_tiff Posted December 5, 2006 Report Posted December 5, 2006 aww yay he survived aesoem chaspter updat asap xoxox Quote
-lolly- Posted December 6, 2006 Report Posted December 6, 2006 Damn you for leaving it there! But i spose if you were tired... Great story baby_gurl, i'm loving reading it. Hope theres more again soon. Quote
Tasha Posted December 6, 2006 Report Posted December 6, 2006 You say the truth about Martha's baby comes out, is it that Jacks the father, or that everyone finds out that Brien is the father??? I think it the second one But anyways, great chapters. You didnt kill Jacky. Your the best Please udpate soon Quote
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