Love at First Sight (by baby gurl) - comments

[xsianx]

Have to mention I like your Av

[>>Emma<<]

Great update Fuj!

Can't wait for the wedding.

I hope Jack does survive.

Please update soon.

[baby gurl]

Have to mention I like your Av

thanks sian!!! i saw a picture of them both and couldn't resist!! although you cant really see jack in the pic very well! x

[baby gurl]

haha, yay the wedding is tomorrow Martha is still preggers right?? And how long does Jack have?? The last cahpter will be him dying wont it?? Your mean Great cahpt though

More please

martha is still pregs...jack has a couple of months and the last chapter may have him dying but it may not!! who says jack's dying for definent (sp)????

[xsianx]

Must be the tummy bug, that I've got

Good writing Fuj

[>>Emma<<]

They can never be happy!

Please just for like one chapter let them be happy.

Martha and Jack fluff, thats what I want!

Update soon please.

[Tasha]

It was going great until the end. Nice way to ruin their wedding. But great cahpt. I hope Jacky is aiite

More please

[baby gurl]

thanks guys! hopefully another chapter later on....just for you emma the next chapter will be happy! (well most of it!) x

[Zetti]

As Jack and Martha had their first kiss as husband and wife Jack felt his stomach going numb.

"Aaaargh." Jack shouted pulling away.

"Jack?" Martha panicked.

"Call an ambulance." Someone shouted.

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Hope you all enjoyed it...well before Jack's pain in the stomach!!! please reply...x

dont let anything bad happen please

*gets on her knees and begs*

[baby gurl]

thanks everyone hopefully *fingers crossed* i can update soon but i might not be due to mocks in 3 weeks in which my mum has told me to revise for! which is why i may not be on msn.

but that doesn't stop me...i will find a way 2 go on msn and to update....hopefully tonight!!