~Rosey~ Posted March 27, 2007 Report Posted March 27, 2007 Yay. We finally got an update. Lol. I really liked it. i cant believe that Matilda is soo young to be having a baby. But I really hop that its a girl. There are too many boy babys on Home and Away Update soon xx
Chop_e Posted March 27, 2007 Report Posted March 27, 2007 Wow! i just read it all and you have me hooked! its great
Sally_Fletcher Posted March 27, 2007 Report Posted March 27, 2007 Thanks everyone! I'll update soon - the power was off for almost the whole of yesterday so that's my excuse!
clarky24 Posted March 27, 2007 Report Posted March 27, 2007 I thought Tony would have been a bit more supportive but im sure he will come around in the end. I really like your style of writing and how you break it down like it would be if you were reading an episode summary from the show.
*~Abi~* Posted March 27, 2007 Report Posted March 27, 2007 Tony's reaction doesnt come as a suprise to me , also this Tyler guy I wonder what he's been up too?? fab add
kaciexox Posted March 28, 2007 Report Posted March 28, 2007 I wish i'd have found this fic earlier!!!!! It's sssssssoooooo good, i cant wait for an update!!! I love the cassie/rocco pairing and also the sally/peter pairing. Ric is just too cute...i love him. Yay, Mattie's going to keep the baby and Beth is dead??? Martha and Jack belong together but Jack and Fitzy... im not so sure. I loved the stalker storyline. You're such a good writer!!!!!! I'm hooked!
Sally_Fletcher Posted March 28, 2007 Report Posted March 28, 2007 /\ Thanks everyone... I'm struggling a bit with this fic, but I'll try to go and find inspiration.
Sally_Fletcher Posted March 28, 2007 Report Posted March 28, 2007 Thanks for all the comments guys! And thanks for the idea Roccoluver... AT DAN AND LEAH'S Rachel and Dan are in the kitchen. RACHEL: He is just smug! And arrogant. And did I mention he's a whiner? DAN: Twice. RACHEL: I can't stand guys like that! Just because he's handsome, he acts like he's God's gift to women! I should have just left him there. DAN: Yup. RACHEL: You know what, I don't even want to think about him anymore. He's so annoying and probably very dumb too. DAN: Then why do you keep talking about him? RACHEL: Sorry, I should just... DAN: No, Rachel... all I'm saying is that if you can't stand the guy you would have forgotten he existed by now. RACHEL: I wish it was that easy. DAN: Isn't it? RACHEL: He's not the type of person you forget easily. DAN: Yeah... RACHEL: But if I never see his face again, it'll be too soon. DAN: Softly Right. HOLDEN/HUNTER HOME Mattie is sitting on the couch. Tony comes in and she jumps up. TONY: Hey Mattie. MATILDA: How could you? TONY: What are you talking about? MATILDA: How could you just forget about mum like that? Didn't she mean anything to you? TONY: Mattie, of course she did... MATILDA: But poor Tony, why should he mourn let's just move on now shall we? TONY: It's not like that! MATILDA: Really, then what's it like? TONY: Emma is just a friend... MATILDA: Whatever. She picks up her bags. TONY: Mattie, wait. MATILDA: I'm moving out. TONY: Let's talk about this... MATILDA: I don't want to talk about this. You're not my father. I'm moving out. She leaves before Tony can stop her. PETER'S APARTEMENT PETER: Well... the brochures aren't here so... SALLY: You could always show me something else. PETER: Oh yeah? Like? SALLY: Your flat. PETER: Oh. Okay, sure. SALLY: Where's the bedroom? PETER; Oh... over here, follow me. He takes her hand and they walk to his room. HOLDEN/HUNTER HOUSE Fitzy and Jack are sitting in Jack's room, kissing. Fitzy pulls away. FITZY: You know what would be good? JACK: Sitting like this forever? FITZY: No. Going for a drive... a walk on the beach maybe... Just getting out of here. Jack laughs. JACK: All right, we can go out. FITZY: Thank you! He stands up and pulls her up. They walk to the car. FLETCHER HOUSE Cassie and Rocco are sitting on the couch. ROCCO: I love you. CASSIE; I love you. They kiss. ROCCO: This is so perfect. CASSIE: What? ROCCO: Everything. CASSIE: Well I hope it stays like this. They kiss again. There is a knock on the door. Cassie jumps up and opens the door. CASSIE: Macca! ON THE ROAD Jack and Fitzy are driving. FITZY: See now this is much better. JACK: You know just how to twist me around your finger. FITZY: Well good. They laugh. A song starts playing on the radio and Fitzy turns it up. FITZY: I love this song! Suddenly a black car speeds out of nowhere, hitting Jack's car. There is a loud collision and then everything goes quiet...
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