sazcaz89 Posted March 28, 2007 Report Posted March 28, 2007 OMG please let them be ok!!!!!! I can't believe Macca is back an matilda has moved out! Please update soon!!
*~Abi~* Posted March 28, 2007 Report Posted March 28, 2007 Jack and Lara had better be ok!! was not expecting Mattie to move out i suspect she;ll move back in at some point wicked add hun love abi xx
Liska Posted March 28, 2007 Report Posted March 28, 2007 Mattie moving out and Macca is back; great chapter!
kaciexox Posted March 28, 2007 Report Posted March 28, 2007 oooooo the suspense .......................... Great chapter! Update soon!
~Rosey~ Posted March 28, 2007 Report Posted March 28, 2007 Please let Jack and Fitzy be okay! Update soon...
Chop_e Posted March 29, 2007 Report Posted March 29, 2007 Wow awesum chapter! I love Jack anf Fitzy together - much beter then Martha and Jack I want to know what Macca does now he is back!!!!
Inactive User Posted March 29, 2007 Report Posted March 29, 2007 Nice part. I do hope Fitzy and Jack survives. Oh cant believe Macca is back. Bugger off, Macca. Cassie's happy with Rocco.
Sally_Fletcher Posted March 29, 2007 Report Posted March 29, 2007 Wow, thanks for the feedback guys! Here is my next part: FLETCHER HOME Macca, Cassie, Rocco and Ric are all sitting in the living room. Cassie looks very uncomfortable. CASSIE: What are you doing here, Macca? MACCA: I like it here. Thought I might come back, see how it goes. CASSIE: Does Martha know you're here? MACCA: Well, I thought... CASSIE: It's a yes or no question. MACCA: No, not yet. CASSIE: You should tell her then. MACCA: I will. Rocco puts his arms around Cassie's shoudlers and she leans back against him. MACCA: So are you two... CASSIE: Yes, we're together. MACCA: I see. There is a knock on the door and Cassie rolls her eyes. CASSIE: Great, another surprize. Ric gives her a look and stands up to open the door. Mattie drops her bags and walks into his arms, crying. RIC: Mattie... MATILDA: I want to move in with you, Ric. I can't stay there anymore, I'll die. RIC: Mattie, what happened? MATILDA: I don't want to talk about it. RIC: Right... but we are going to have to ask Sal first. MATILDA: If I can't stay here I'm phoning Robbie to come and get me. He told me I could anytime and I will. RIC: Okay, come on in. We'll make a plan. Mattie walks in with Ric. She sees Macca and frowns. MATILDA: What are you doing here? MACCA: I'm back in the Bay. MATILDA: Ric, could you make me a sandwich please? I'm hungry. RIC: Sure. What do you want on it? MATILDA: Chicken, honey and mayo. Ooh, and some peanut butter too. Ric looks disgusted, but smiles and nods. Cassie looks at Mattie and frowns. CASSIE: You're pregnant, aren't you? IN THE CAR... It is very quiet except for something dripping. Jack opens his eyes. Fitzy is lying in a small heap. Jack tries to sit up and gasps in pain. He reaches for his cell phone in his pocket and dials a number. JACK: No signal... oh come on, this can't be happening. He hits the phone and frowns. JACK: Fitzy? Can you hear me? Come on, wake up I don't like talking to myself... please? He reaches over and touces her forehead. He looks at his hand in horror - it is covered in blood now. JACK: No way, this isn't happening... He hits his phone again and dials a number again. PETER'S APARTEMENT Peter and Sally are lying on his bed, kissing. She takes off his shirt and he pulls her closer. His cell phone starts ringing. PETER: Talk about bad timing! He lets go of Sal and picks up his phone and frowns. PETER: It's Jack. SALLY: Well, answer it might be important. PETER: Yeah... He kisses her quikly and then answers the phone Hey, mate! JACK: Pete... PETER: Jack? I can't hear you, mate! Speak up! JACK: Peter there was an accident... Fitzy is hurt we had a car accident... PETER: The phone is breaking up, Jack, can I call you back? JACK: NO! Peter, listen to me, drive to the beach please! Hurry up, you have to help us? The phone goes dead and Peter frowns. SALLY: What was that about? PETER: I couldn't hear him... something about the beach. SALLY: The beach? PETER: Yeah. Well, where were we? He kisses her again, but she pushes him away. SALLY: You know, talking about the beach, it sounds kind of inviting. PETER: But making out sounds better... SALLY: Awe, come on, Pete... PETER: Fine, we can go to the beach. SALLY: Great! She kisses him and they walk out. AMANDA'S HOUSE (I forgot about these two.) Amanda and Drew are lying on the couch. He is holding her. AMANDA: So what is with your father and Sally? DREW: I'm not sure. But hey, if it keeps him from finding us out I'm happy. AMANDA: So you wouldn't mind having your teacher as your stepmum? DREW: Wouldn't mind? Of course I would! My dad is not marrying her, it's just wrong. AMANDA: Why? DREW: Because. But let's not talk about them. I'm sure we can find something better to do... They kiss. A car is driving to the beach. The driver sees the two cars which crashed and stops. Tyler jumps out of the car and runs closer.
kaciexox Posted March 29, 2007 Report Posted March 29, 2007 oooo great update. Rocco is so cute with Cassie. I actually never thought of them as a couple but it really works!! Great job!
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