Sally_Fletcher Posted May 7, 2007 Report Posted May 7, 2007 I seriously considered abandoning this fic, but in the end (after a long emotional battle between my two personalities) I decided to continue with it! So thanks for all the feedback, and here is the next update: ON THE BEACH. Cassie is walking on the beach. MACCA: Cas! Wait up! She turns around, glaring at Macca. CASSIE: What? MACCA; Where's loverboy? CASSIE: If you mean Rocco, he has enough respect for me to leave me when I need to be alone. Unlike some other people. MACCA; Like me? CASSIE: Yes. Like you. MACCA; Do you know what I think? CASSIE: No. And I don't care either. MACCA: I think you're still in love with me. CASSIE: Have you completely lost the plot now? MACCA: Come on, babe... you know what we had was... CASSIE: Special? Guess what, what Rocco and I have is special too. I love him Macca, and if you try to get between us I will never forgive you. She glares at him one last time before storming off angrily. SOMEWHERE ELSE ON THE BEACH (Oh, what a large beach this is.) Mattie is sitting next to Robbie, looking at him tearfully. MATILDA: This is my fault. ROBBIE: Mattie! How can me getting ill be your fault? MATILDA: I must have done something in the past... something I'm being punished for now. ROBBIE: How can you think that? It's not true! MATILDA: Then why does everyone I love die? Robbie pulls her into a hug and she starts crying. MATILDA: I can't lose you, Rob! ROBBIE: And you never will. MATILDA; But you're dying! ROBBIE: That doesn't mean you're losing me, Mattie. I'll always be in your heart. Just like you'll always be in mine. IN THE HOSPITAL. Rachel enters Jack's room. RACHEL: Hey... how are you feeling today? JACK: All right. RACHEL: That's good! JACK: Yeah... I... I'm sorry for the way I've been behaving. It wasn't fair. RACHEL: It's perfectly understandable. JACK: Yeah. RACHEL: So are you ready to see your friends yet? JACK: No... I don't want to see them yet. RACHEL: That's okay. They all sent you their love though. JACK: Thanks. RACHEL: I'll check in on you again later... JACK: Yeah, sure. She turns around to leave. JACK: Rachel? RACHEL: Turns around. Yeah? JACK: Could you... I want to see Sally. Could you ask her to drop in? RACHEL: Yeah sure. I could do that. JACK: Thanks. He lies back with a small smile as Rachel leaves. FLETCHER HOUSE. Sally and Peter are sitting at the kitchen table. Pippa is also sitting there, eating messily. SALLY: I feel so sorry for him. I just wish there was something else I could do. PETER: You've done more than enough for him. I need some attention now! She laughs and kisses him. Pippa makes a face. PETER: What's that face? PIPPA: Eeeww! SALLY: I don't think she likes you kissing me Detective. PETER: Well she'll just have to get used to it! He kisses Sally again and Pippa makes vomit-sounds, causing Peter and Sally to break apart and laugh. Cassie enters, looking upset. SALLY: Hey Cas... what's wrong? She starts crying and falls down on the couch. CASSIE: It's Macca... he's back and... he's trying to get between me and Rocco... PETER: What? CASSIE: He won't stay away from me, I don't know what to do... PETER: Well you could file a restraining order against him... if you want... CASSIE: That's a bit too drastic... SALLY: Well do you still have feelings for him? CASSIE: I don't know... I love Rocco... But Macca and I shared some special times... I don't know what to do, Sal! Sally sits down next to Cassie and hugs her. SALLY: Just listen to your heart. Who do you want to be with? CASSIE: Rocco. SALLY: Then that's settled. CASSIE: But I don't want to hurt Macca. SALLY: Oh, Cas... I don't think you're going to have a choice. IN HOSPITAL. Martha is waiting in front of Jack's room. Rachel comes out and Martha looks at her, excited. RACHEL: I'm sorry, Martha. He doesn't want to see you. MARTHA: But... RACHEL: Look, don't take it personally. He doesn't want to see anyone, except for... MARTHA: For? RACHEL: Sally. MARTHA: What? RACHEL: Look, she was here, she talked to him. At the moment he feels like she's the only one who understands him. MARTHA: I see. Well... I'm going out. See you Rachel. She storms off and Rachel frowns slightly.
Liska Posted May 7, 2007 Report Posted May 7, 2007 Robbie and Matilda are so sweet Great, keep it coming!
sazcaz89 Posted May 7, 2007 Report Posted May 7, 2007 Am so glad you decided not to abandon this fic. Great update am glad cassie chose Rocco. Poor Jack, am glad he can talk to Sally though. Martha needs to learn to understand how he is feeling and not get in a big mood. update soon
*~Abi~* Posted May 7, 2007 Report Posted May 7, 2007 this fic is great hun and fab add, martha needs to relaise that jack needs time and that its good that he feels he can talk to Sal after all he needs to be able to talk to somebodyafter everything that he has been through loving this fic so far love abi xx
Roccoluver Posted May 7, 2007 Report Posted May 7, 2007 PETER: Well you could file a restraining order against him Thats our Peter :lol Good on Cassie for choosing Rocco over Macca, I would of done the same. Poor Jack, I still want Jack/Sally stuff even if its just like the Jack/Tasha stuff .I've got it, then only reason Jack gets hurt so much is to get the girls!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Poor Matilda, its not her fault, I don't want Robbie to die Great update, update soon
Sally_Fletcher Posted May 7, 2007 Report Posted May 7, 2007 Thanks a lot guys! Jane, I kind of liked the Jack/Tasha stuff. (Hides from everyone's raging bullets/sticks/stones etc) Anyway, I'll update soonish... thanks again for the feedback!
Roccoluver Posted May 7, 2007 Report Posted May 7, 2007 Jane, I kind of liked the Jack/Tasha stuff. (Hides from everyone's raging bullets/sticks/stones etc) Me to! (incase you were implying I didn't) how could no-one not like it, they were so cute being there for each other and it was great stuff, so good you should do it in your story wiht Jack and Sally.... No that's not peer pressure
sazcaz89 Posted May 7, 2007 Report Posted May 7, 2007 i actually thought the jack and tasha stuff was cute but only until martha and robbie were saved.
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