tasha7905 Posted May 15, 2007 Report Posted May 15, 2007 Just caught up and its still fantastic Im so glad you carried on with it. Matilda and Ric are so perfect together. Diesel better stay away from Sally and Mattie, but I get the feeling he is back to cause trouble. Poor Peter I can understand why he is annoyed at Jack, but he was right Sal only helps because she cares. I hope Jack moves on to someone else. I love Rocco and Cass together and hope Macca takes the hint and leaves them alone. Great fic hope there is more soon.
sazcaz89 Posted May 15, 2007 Report Posted May 15, 2007 Uh-oh what is diesel going to do!! update soon!!!
Liska Posted May 15, 2007 Report Posted May 15, 2007 Great update! I wonder what Diesel is going to do
Sally_Fletcher Posted May 16, 2007 Report Posted May 16, 2007 Thanks for the feedback everyone! Here is the next part! FLETCHER HOUSE Diesel pulls a gun out of his pocket and points it at Peter. DIESEL: Get on the floor. Peter slowly slides to the floor, holding Pippa closely. PETER: Just... tell me what you want... we can sort this out, put down the gun and... DIESEL: Yeah right! Like I'm going to do that! I'm not an idiot. Pippa starts crying and Diesel points the gun at her. DIESEL: And shut the kid up! PETER: Pip... look at me. Be quiet, try... try to sleep. PIPPA: Dadda... PETER: Daddy's right here, Pip. I won't let you go. Diesel snorts and sits down on the couch. Pippa closes her eyes. DIESEL: So what happened to Flynnie boy? PETER: He's dead. DIESEL: Gmf. He should have died earlier. Then Sally and I would have been together. PETER: I doubt. DIESEL: Sally loves me. PETER: Right. If you say so. DIESEL: So how did you trick her into falling for you? PETER: That's none of your business. DIESEL: Stop cheeking me or the kid gets it! PETER: Mate if you would just... The door opens. PETER: Sally! Stay out of... It's too late, as Sally has already entered. She looks at Diesel, petrified. DIESEL: Hey, Sal. Nice of you to join us. IN THE HOSPITAL Jack is back in his room. He's staring at the roof with a smile. Rachel comes in. RACHEL: Hey, Jack. Can I talk to you? JACK: Sure! Come in. What's wrong? RACHEL: I've noticed that you're becoming quite attached to Sally... JACK: Yeah... she's amazing. If it wasn't for her, I don't know what I would have done! She's helping me to find a reason to live again, you know. Rachel nods slowly and stands up. JACK: You wanted to say something? RACHEL: Eh... Yeah, I just remembered... I have a really important meeting to go to. I'll talk to you later. She walks to the counter where she picks up the phone. FLETCHER HOUSE Sally's cell phone starts ringing. Diesel points the gun at her when she reaches for it. DIESEL: Don't even think about it! SALLY: I have to answer... DIESEL: Give it here. NOW! She gives him the phone and he switches it off. Sally and Peter look at each other miserably. DIESEL: Stop that! PETER: What? DIESEL: The whole talking through your eyes. It pisses me off. Sally rubs her forehead and Peter moves closer to her. PETER: You okay? SALLY: I'm just getting a migraine. Peter puts his arm around her and she rests her head on his shoulder. Diesel glares at them. SALLY: Just so we know, how long are you planning to keep this up? DIESEL: As long as I want to. And shut the hell up. PETER: Or what? Diesel walks to them and presses the gun to Pippa's head. DIESEL: Keep talking and you'll find out.
Lilone Posted May 16, 2007 Report Posted May 16, 2007 :o You can't kill Pip! She called Pete, Dadda that was sooooooo cute Update soon
sazcaz89 Posted May 16, 2007 Report Posted May 16, 2007 Pip called Pete dadda. how cute please don't kill her!!1 update soon
ilovekateritchie Posted May 16, 2007 Report Posted May 16, 2007 What is Diesel doing pressing a gun against Pippa's head??? Evil twisted bad guy!
Roccoluver Posted May 16, 2007 Report Posted May 16, 2007 Pippa won't die. Great update, evil Diesel, I wonder what Rachels up to (Is she trying to break up my Jack/Sally) Update soon, and remember-Pippa can't die
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