Sally_Fletcher Posted March 3, 2007 Report Posted March 3, 2007 Peter thinks Johnny is safely in jail... but is he still? Who violated Sally's car? Was it the same person who broke in to the Holden house? Are these just random attacks or is it a stalker at work? And which two Summer Bay women will soon find themselves in grave danger? It'll be interesting to see what you guys think... And whether you guess right...
Roccoluver Posted March 4, 2007 Report Posted March 4, 2007 Peter thinks Johnny is safely in jail... but is he still? Who violated Sally's car? Was it the same person who broke in to the Holden house? Are these just random attacks or is it a stalker at work? And which two Summer Bay women will soon find themselves in grave danger? It'll be interesting to see what you guys think... And whether you guess right... Well I think this story is great, I love Rocco in this fic(I love Rocco all theim time though ), and your Sally is so like the Sally in the show. The storyline and plot is great, Im loving it and and can't wait for you to update, now i just wished I had discovered this forum ages ago.
clarky24 Posted March 4, 2007 Report Posted March 4, 2007 I think this story is great as well. I like all the Peter/Sally stuff. When she ran into his arms it reminded me of that time on the show when he saved her from Zoe. You have got me guessing on who the stalker could be. I don't think it would be Johnny, but who knows i maybe wrong. I also like the Rocco/Cassie pairing. I think they would be good together if this is where the story is heading.
Sally_Fletcher Posted March 4, 2007 Report Posted March 4, 2007 /\ /\ Thanks a lot guys! EPISODE/CHAPTER 5 Previously in Summer Bay. AT THE POLICE STATION FITZY: She puts down the phone and looks at Jack. Jack, that was your dad. Someone broke in to the house. Tony and Beth walk out, followed by Jack and Fitzy. Just before they reach the door, Fitzy looks down and picks something up from the ground. It’s a piece of paper. She looks at it and then puts it in her pocket… ROCCO: You still didn't deserve to be treated like that Cassie. Macca should have treated you like the amazing, special woman that you are. CASSIE: Thanks. ROCCO: Come to the diner with me, I'll buy you lunch. He pulls her up by her hand and they walk away. SALLY: Come out! We can talk! A gunshot is fired. It soars past Sally and hits a tree nearby. Without thinking twice, Sally starts running away as fast as she can. Two patrol cars are on their way to the school and both come to a stop when the drivers see Sally. Peter jumps out of one of the cars and Sally runs right into his arms. He holds her closely, stroking her hair. ROCCO: What if it is him, Sally? What if this is my fault? SALLY: Peter doesn’t think it’s Johnny. And neither do I. ROCCO: But it could be! If I never came to the bay… then none of this would have happened! SALLY: You can’t say that… Besides, if you never came to the Bay… I wouldn’t have had you as my son. Rocco starts crying. ROCCO: I wish… I wish you really were my mum. My life would have been so much better! Sally and Rocco hug. SUMMER BAY HIGH It is very late at night. Sally is standing in the parking area, all alone. Suddenly, out of nowhere, Zoe appears. SALLY: Zoe? This isn’t possible… you died. ZOE: I faked my death before, didn’t I? And you really fell for it again. All of you. SALLY: It doesn’t have to be like this, Zoe. We can help you. ZOE: I don’t need help. I need revenge. And that’s what I’m getting. She lifts her hand to show a gun. SALLY: Somebody help me! ZOE: No one can hear you. SALLY: Peter! ZOE: I knew you’d call him. Everybody always does. Leah called him too. So did Dan and Drew and Martha and Cassie and Matilda and Lucas and Alf. Come to think of it… the only one who didn’t call him was Pippa. She didn’t even cry. SALLY: Please, Pippa is just a baby. ZOE: It’s too late to beg now. I already killed her. And now I’m going to kill you. A gunshot is fired and Sally slowly falls to the ground. PETER: Sally! He sits up in bed, breathing heavily. Then he jumps out of bed and grabs his car keys. DAN AND LEAH’S HOUSE Someone is knocking on the door loudly. Leah sleepily walks to the front door. LEAH: I’m coming, I’m coming. She opens the door. Peter? What are you doing here, it’s two A.M. Peter grabs Leah’s arms and closes his eyes. PETER: Where’s Dan? LEAH: In bed where everyone else in Summer Bay is! Peter… PETER: It’s Zoe. LEAH: Zoe? PETER: She… she said you were dead… LEAH: I’m not. And Zoe is dead, I think you just had a dream. PETER: It wasn’t a dream! She told Sal just before… Sal! I have to go, lock the doors and close the windows, don’t let her get you! He runs off again, Leah closes the door with a frown then picks up the phone. SUMMER BAY HIGH Peter’s car comes to a stop. He jumps out and runs to the middle of the parking area. PETER: Sally! Sal, are you here? He turns around and runs his fingers through his hair. Where is she, Zoe? There is no answer, no sound, and he gets back into his car and drives away again. FLETCHER HOME Sally is sitting in the living room. As soon as she hears a knock she gets up to open the door. SALLY: Peter… PETER: You’re all right! SALLY: I’m fine, Leah called me. She said something about Zoe? PETER: It’s her, I know it is! SALLY: Come in, Peter. He walks in behind her. PETER: I saw it… I saw her shooting you… and you called for me and I couldn’t do anything! I’m sorry, Sal! She takes both his hands in hers. SALLY: It was just a dream Peter. A very bad one, by the sound of it. PETER: Where’s Pippa? SALLY: Asleep upstairs. PETER: Are you sure? SALLY; Of course I am. Come take a look. They walk upstairs. FLETCHER HOUSE, PIPPA’S ROOM. Sally and Peter are standing next to Pippa’s bed. SALLY: See? She’s fine, I’m fine… PETER: I’m sorry, Sal. I really am. SALLY: It’s okay. PETER: It’s a good thing Drew is staying at Lucas’ tonight. He’d think I’m going crazy. Maybe I am. SALLY: No, you’re not. And you’re not going back home, not in the state you’re in. You’re staying here tonight. Come on.
Sally_Fletcher Posted March 4, 2007 Report Posted March 4, 2007 HOLDEN/HUNTER HOME Drew and Lucas are lying in Lucas’ room. LUCAS: You’re not serious! DREW: It’s true, I swear! But you can’t tell anyone because she’ll kill me. LUCAS: Yeah, like anyone would believe me. DREW: Yeah, I know – it’s crazy. But she’s amazing, mate. LUCAS: You know what the weirdest part is? She’s my girlfriend’s mum. DREW: Yeah, I know! LUCAS: Man! Well, I don’t see the four of us going on a double date any time soon. You know she and your dad… DREW: Yeah. That’s why he can’t find out. LUCAS: He’d probably have her arrested for sleeping with a minor or something. They both laugh. DREW: Maybe we should set him up with someone… just to distract him. LUCAS: Yeah, but who? DREW: What about that cop? Fitzy? LUCAS: No, I think Jack’s into her. What about Martha? DREW: No way! Too bad Leah and Dan are married, she’d be a nice stepmum. LUCAS: What about Sally? DREW: She’s a teacher! LUCAS: So? She’s nice. And pretty cute too. DREW: No way. Besides I don’t think I could handle living with Ric. And Sally and dad... it just won't work. LUCAS: Then I would suggest Amanda… but she’s taken. They laugh again. FLETCHER HOME. (Sunrise) Sally’s room. Sally is lying on the bed with Peter next to her. His one arm is draped around her waist and holding her hand while his other arm is cradling Pippa. Sally wakes up and frowns for a second. Then she looks at Pippa who is sleeping soundly and smiles. SALLY: Peter… Peter, wake up. PETER: Hmm? Slowly opens his eyes. Oh… morning Sal. SALLY: Hey, how are you feeling? PETER: Like an idiot. SALLY: Don’t, it’s not that bad. PETER: I can’t even imagine what you must be thinking – the big, bad detective needs to hold your hand to get a good night’s sleep. SALLY: You had a bad day, it’s understandable. Anyone would have been upset. PETER: Still… I had no right pitching up here in the middle of the night and yet you let me stay here. Thank you. SALLY: It’s fine, really. Besides, I think Pippa enjoyed having you here. Peter sits up, carefully picking Pippa up. He kisses the top of her head. PETER: Well it helped me a lot. Being here. SALLY: I’m glad. No more bad dreams then? PETER: I feel like a total wimp now, but no. Thank you. I’d better get home – before anyone else wakes up and jumps to conclusions. Bye, Sal. He carefully puts Pippa in her arms and walks out. Sally hugs Pippa. SUMMER BAY HIGH Cassie, Matilda and Rocco are walking to class. MATILDA: Hey, Ric and I are going to the diner tonight. You guys want to join us? CASSIE: Sure! Rocco? ROCCO: Yeah, why not? CASSIE: I’ll have to make sure it’s okay with Sal, but I don’t think it’ll be a problem. MATILDA: Great. Do you mind if I invite Lucas and Belle? CASSIE: Not at all. MATILDA: Okay. See you guys later! She runs off. ROCCO: Hey, Cas… CASSIE: Yeah? ROCCO: This thing tonight… CASSIE: Yeah? ROCCO: Would you… be my date, sort of? Only if you want to, I understand if you don’t because of Macca and everything, I just figured that we could go together. CASSIE: Yeah, I’d like that. ROCCO: Really? CASSIE: Yeah. ROCCO: Cool. They smile at each other. Comments would still be appreciated - even if u hate it, lol. But I do hope u enjoyed it.
Zetti Posted March 4, 2007 Report Posted March 4, 2007 I really like it. Especially Drew and Lucas talking!
Roccoluver Posted March 4, 2007 Report Posted March 4, 2007 I love thi story, at least Sally's not dead, you had me worried for a minute, and Rocco and Cassie, this is great.
Sally_Fletcher Posted March 4, 2007 Report Posted March 4, 2007 /\ /\ Thanks a lot guys. I'll put on the next update in a few minutes. But Roccoluver, I could never kill Sally. I'm glad ur enjoying the Rocco/Cassie thing, wasn't sure how people would react to that.
Lilone Posted March 4, 2007 Report Posted March 4, 2007 I love this Sorry I didn't comment sooner.... I didn't have time. It's awesome. Sally and Pete
Sally_Fletcher Posted March 4, 2007 Report Posted March 4, 2007 /\ /\ Thanks a lot! EPISODE/CHAPTER 6 Previously in Summer Bay SALLY: Peter! ZOE: I knew you’d call him. Everybody always does. Leah called him too. So did Dan and Drew and Martha and Cassie and Matilda and Lucas and Alf. Come to think of it… the only one who didn’t call him was Pippa. She didn’t even cry. SALLY: Please, Pippa is just a baby. ZOE: It’s too late to beg now. I already killed her. And now I’m going to kill you. A gunshot is fired and Sally slowly falls to the ground. PETER: Sally! He sits up in bed, breathing heavily. PETER: I saw it… I saw her shooting you… and you called for me and I couldn’t do anything! I’m sorry, Sal! She takes both his hands in hers. SALLY: It was just a dream Peter. A very bad one, by the sound of it. DREW: Yeah, I know – it’s crazy. But she’s amazing, mate. LUCAS: You know what the weirdest part is? She’s my girlfriend’s mum. DREW: Yeah, I know! LUCAS: Man! Well, I don’t see the four of us going on a double date any time soon. You know she and your dad… DREW: Yeah. That’s why he can’t find out. DREW: Maybe we should set him up with someone… just to distract him. LUCAS: What about Sally? DREW: She’s a teacher! LUCAS: So? She’s nice. And pretty cute too. DREW: No way. FLETCHER HOME. (Sunrise) Sally’s room. Sally is lying on the bed with Peter next to her. His one arm is draped around her waist and holding her hand while his other arm is cradling Pippa. ROCCO: This thing tonight… CASSIE: Yeah? ROCCO: Would you… be my date, sort of? Only if you want to, I understand if you don’t because of Macca and everything, I just figured that we could go together. CASSIE: Yeah, I’d like that. ROCCO: Really? CASSIE: Yeah. DAN AND LEAH’S HOUSE PETER: I don’t know what to say. LEAH: So you won’t tell anyone? PETER: No… but you’re going to have to tell Dan sooner or later. LEAH: I’d rather it be later. PETER: You can’t keep this from him, Leah. LEAH: I know. And I’ll tell him… just… when the time is right. PETER: Okay. Look, I have to go… but call me. LEAH: Yeah, I will. They hug and Peter leaves. SUMMER BAY HIGH Lucas and Belle are sitting outside. BELLE: You must have been so freaked out. LUCAS: Yeah, I was. Especially with the pictures turned over, that was just crazy. BELLE: I don’t get it though, why would someone break in but not take anything – just turn over the pictures? LUCAS: It’s obviously some lunatic. I just don’t get why we’re being targeted. Or Miss Fletcher for that matter – why would someone want to harm her? BELLE: Maybe it’s just random stuff, people playing pranks. LUCAS; Or maybe it’s a stalker. BELLE: You’re kidding, right? Isn’t there like a one stalker per town rule or something? LUCAS: Laughs I’m serious though. Something just tells me that this is far more twisted than anyone believes. SUMMER BAY HIGH – SALLY’S OFFICE. Sally is sitting on her chair, holding a photo of her and Flynn. She looks at it for a while and then turns it over. The following words are scribbled on the back: You really thought this was over? Tick Tock, I’m coming. Sally shivers and folds her arms. DAN AND LEAH’S HOUSE. Leah is on the phone. LEAH: Rachel, I’ve left you a dozen messages… Please call me back, this is urgent! So call me. Bye. When she turns around, Dan is standing behind her. DAN: What’s urgent? LEAH: Dan! Sorry it's so short, I have to go to bed though becoz I'm working tomorrow, but I'll update again as soon as I can.
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